Reviews for Desires Unmasked
Lucy Phantomhive chapter 2 . 9/2/2012
Please upload
777angeloflove chapter 2 . 4/20/2011
AWESOME STORY SO FAR~! PLEASE UPDATE! DON'T ABANDON THE STORY!
Silver-Moon-Light94 chapter 2 . 2/14/2010
yay! yoite isn't dead! :D (crying tears of happens/ joy) can't wait for the next chapter. go miharu! :D
papapapuffy chapter 2 . 1/19/2010
update! How will Yoite react when hie wish wasn't granted. x]
Mistress of the Words chapter 2 . 12/12/2009
Aw, it's so cute I was so sad when Yoite disappeared at the end, I nearly cried my eyes out! Miharu really liked him, they had so much that was the same between them...why couldn't he choose to be saved?
blushuu chapter 2 . 11/25/2009
ZOMG! AMAZING! I can't wait for the next update!
Guest chapter 2 . 11/4/2009
aww your doing good.. keep going
iggyismine chapter 2 . 10/3/2009
next chapter be up soon? :D
melloxmatt4ever chapter 2 . 10/2/2009
i command you to right moar

lol
miki230 chapter 2 . 10/2/2009
plz keep writing!
Kalana Fox chapter 2 . 9/30/2009
I'm sorry if I sounded demanding, I was just giving you a suggestion. Most people tend to like reading longer chapters.

And aww, this was cute :-).
Kalana Fox chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
So many times I've wished for the story to do this...

I like the idea of where this is heading, but here's some advice: write longer chapters.

Your one-shots were incredibly short and while this first chapter was longer than them by a bit, there's more you could've written.

Just saying.

Please update soon!
Shannara810 chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
So short?

I cried like a baby at the end of Nabari. Poor Yoite ç_ç Just when he was starting to want to live, he died. It's a big NO NO.

It was about time someone wrote a damn good story to make them finally happy. Please we need a new chapter soon!
Idiots-Rule-The-World chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
hey this is a great story! please please continue with it! i hope you update soon!