|Reviews for Prisoner of Azkaban Rewrite|
| Emperor Andross chapter 2 . 3/8
Just a couple of timing issues here, Harry was 18 months when his parents died, so for Lily to have had Lucy, she would have to have been pregnant some 0-8 months after Harry was born, meaning that Lucy could not have possibly been 10 months old when she was adopted. 10 weeks seems like a better number, but people would likely have known about her, as they were only in hiding for about a month before they died if I remember correctly.
Also, I doubt very much whether James would have calmly been discussing the Quiddich results with anyone. The war started in their last year of school and continued until their death.
| Mentathial chapter 10 . 1/1/2016
wow! It was lovely but a bit more details would be awesome! Also, while I get and like Lucy, sometimes it seems like she has no feels whatsoever for her adoptive family and you changed the timeline of Jilly death a bit right? That's something I was confused about so I asked. Love the story.
| RoyalPrincessHinataHyuga chapter 10 . 10/30/2013
I love it. D
| MusicFreak24601 chapter 10 . 1/16/2012
Cant wait til the sequel! I love Lucy's character )
| Cookie05 chapter 10 . 8/12/2011
I love this story
prisoner of azkaban is one of my favs
would u please pm me when u do the goblet of fire
if u forget I'll put u on my alerts anyway
| Penny is wise chapter 10 . 6/20/2011
Pretty good story.
| Doctor Clementine Who chapter 1 . 5/1/2011
Ooh this is exciting!
| Bri P chapter 10 . 5/1/2011
I loved this story! Lucy was very cute. When you post Goblet of Fire can you add an authors note to this story saying it? Please and thank you! )
| Hillary Izzy Blair chapter 6 . 12/28/2010
If anyone wants to draw any fan art for this (please!) that would be great. Just send a link to it in the review! Or send it to me if you know how (I don't know how). Thank you all for the great reviews, chapter seven is in progress!
| Put me through to the pentagon chapter 6 . 12/28/2010
I really love this story!
Please update soon!
| hi chapter 4 . 10/14/2010
I really like this. PLEASE write more!
| you go girl chapter 4 . 7/12/2010
good job with this! one suggestion, you skipped through the year very quickly, you might want to slow things down a bit or at least make a note that you're jumping through so much time.
| Hillary Izzy Blair chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Hey, thanks the good reviews! (constructive critism is great too!) So, I've been adding asterixs (*) to show when there is a time change but it doesn't seem to be appearing in the published chapter, so just try to guess where they are! Someone suggested Lucy meeting Luna Lovegood. It's a good idea, but I'm trying to be as chronological as possible here to the books. Lucy meets people and does things at the same time as Harry. Harry hasn't met Luna yet and so neither has Lucy. But we'll get there eventually!
Thanks again, it means a lot when people subscribe and add to their favourites. And review! Hope you enjoy the next chapter!
| Guest chapter 3 . 6/19/2010
if you don't have an idea of your own, maybe you could use this suggestion?
have harry's sister (whose name i have forgotten) meet luna lovegood!
just an idea you don't have to use it :)
| Bri P chapter 2 . 3/3/2010