Reviews for Giving Up
Guest chapter 1 . 7/5/2013
I wish a least Bella woulda died. But NO, EDAWRD, NO.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/30/2012
Life is insignificant. We live. And the we die. The only thing that makes it slightly better are the people around us.

Good job btw!
ever4 chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
Sad and good. Sad. Morose. Hey, did I mention sad yet? Sad. Very sad. Good. Sad again...
Aurora C chapter 1 . 8/5/2010
you are so young to already know this kind of feelings, been there done that, in some ways still there and yes we all need someone and is hard to go on day after day all by urself it was nice reading something so different and deep thank you keep the good work
koren.x chapter 1 . 2/26/2010
aw it was really good
life sucks then u diexxxxxxxxx chapter 1 . 2/23/2010
hey dude plz start on the story already it looks good and it's different from the way most people see edward i'm more into the darker sivde of life not that you care i just had to add that in what was i saying...oh yeah finish the story :)
life sucks then u diexxxxxxxxx chapter 1 . 2/17/2010
please finish this story it looks really dark and awesome (i'm emothic) emothic is my word by the way a cross between emo and gothic :)
Brown eyed Writer Girl chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
Please continue this... it sounds like it could be a really good story. I absolutely loved it.
my2galspal chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
I really liked your story. Are you planning to continue it after the contest or leave it here? Thanks for sharing your writing and best of luck in the contest.
Book2romantic chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
This seemed incredibly sparse for some reason. Was it deliberate? They have rather empty lives, after all.
FORVER INACTIVE chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
WOW that was really good...maybe you should think of continuing this...
Raven Jadewolfe chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
I thought it was very good, well written
J.DRAST chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
Hello. This was a very good story. I just LOVED it! The reader can actually "feel" the despair of the characters-your descriptions are so livid. Wonderful! It was amazing how Bella felt as if she had to go back to the cemetary and then she was desperately trying to help Edward, even going inside the gate, when it was something she would never even attempt to do. She thought of someone else before herself. And now they're friends! I was wondering if you are going to continue this story, or is a one-shot? I think you could keep going and expand on their relationship and healing process. Thanks.

Suzan Noerr
hermine chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
(:

Well done on a great story, short, dark and great. :) It kept the reader interested, and you portrayed the characters well.

I loved all the darkness, and then at the end, with 'And now, the Bridgewater Cemetery would be bare for once on cold nights no one dared to go outside for. Except for on occasions when Edward really did want to visit his father.'

Hahaha :)

I was fully like sombre after reading it, and then the last sentence made me smile. (:

Well done on a great story, good luck in the contest, you at least have one voter here ;)

Hahaha :) :)
Darkward - In The Dark chapter 1 . 9/29/2009
Thank you for entering!

Good luck!

Darkward
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