Reviews for At the Riverside of Neverland
mystery chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
So s a d
Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
I cryed. Correction I am crying while writing this
Etrinity chapter 1 . 7/10/2015
This story was so good that it actually made me emotional my goodness. Probably because Peter Pan is one of my favorite, favorite stories of all time and that paired with natsu and lucy...GAHHH
I also really liked all of those references from the actual peter pan story. SO GOOD! -claps-
derin chapter 1 . 7/3/2015
i gues you did your best
DragonsArePrettyCool chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
That's depressing. That is so depressing. And unfair. I love tragic stories so much.
But now I need to go read a happy story. BYE!
awesome12m chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
OMG THAT IS THE F- SADDEST STORY THAT IVE EVER READ IN MY ENTIRE F- Life please continue writing more.I CANT STOP F- CRYING THAT WAS SO SOOOOOOOOOOOO SAD BIT BEAUTIFUL AT THE SAME TIME.!#LUV
AnimeStitches chapter 1 . 6/15/2015
I literally started crying, that was so beautiful and you did such a good job writing this. Keep up the great stories!
Ari colecchi chapter 1 . 6/11/2015
Ok I know for one thing natsu in the actual fairy tail series can age y'know! And I get that it's fanfiction but what the F! That's just wrong that natsu kissed Lucy at the end, she's old! Not hating or anything but, this just puts a sad thing to the natsu x Lucy shipping! I rest my case!
RaNDoem chapter 1 . 6/9/2015
...YOU DID NOT JUST DO THAT OMG THAT WAS SO SAD WHAT ARE YOU DOING TO MY LIFE I AM DYING RIGHT NOW LUCYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY THAT WAS SO TRAGIC I FEEL SO BAD FOR NATSU WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY TTATT
fluorescentcas chapter 1 . 6/5/2015
Literally that was a beautiful story but OH MY GODS I'M HARDCORE CRYING RIGHT NOW... MY PILLOW IS DRENCHED IN TEARS.
SilverOverGold chapter 1 . 5/30/2015
Oh my God, this was so wonderfully tragic. I loved how you converted the emotions so well! You could clearly tell just how heartbroken Natsu was and just how sad Lucy was as well! I felt so bad for Natsu the most, because he had to watch as the one he loved have a child with another man, had to watch as everything that could've been his fly by his eyes. He had to watch as Lucy's daughter get married and not down the aisle with her. He never got to love Lucy like he should've. He had to watch as Lucy grew old before his very eyes. And damn, the song Born to Die by Lana DelRay fits so well with this! At least I think so. This was really heartbreaking to read, but thank you so much for making this!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/28/2015
It was really good and feelsy
Oh sorry couldnt hear you over the sounD OF MY HEART BEING SMASHED INTO THOUSAND PIECES AND BEATEN AND WALKED ON YEAH SORRY
unknown chapter 1 . 5/25/2015
that was so sad it made me cry
akib chapter 1 . 5/22/2015
i'm a man, and i'm not ashamed of crying after reading this.i'm still crying.
Mademoiselle Kufufu chapter 1 . 5/17/2015
I can't stop crying...!

I love and hate you at the same time for writing this story! xD

And the end, man ! I think that was the worse part ...! I really hope he will meet her again :)
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