|Reviews for At the Riverside of Neverland|
| Empress of Everything chapter 1 . 9/23/2015
*big blubbering tears rolling down cheeks from swollen eyes*
I think you just shattered my heart completely... So sad...
But so possible! He's so much older than her, and there's no telling what would happen! But, oh, you wrote this so well.
The end... OH LORD HAVE MERCY THE END SHE JUST CLOSED HER EYES AND HE GOT TO SEE HER AGAIN AND TALK TO HER BEFORE SHE DIED MY SWEET NATSU AND LUCY YOU POOR DARLINGS MY HEART BREAKS FOR YOU.
I'm just gonna go cry in a corner or watch fluffy videos to recover from the trauma you just put me through!
| ecilan202 chapter 1 . 9/6/2015
Oh my god, this is so sad yet so brilliant! I praise the author for thinking of a deliciously angsty plot. *weeps *
| Verdantia Akalixi chapter 1 . 9/5/2015
So saaaaad! I can't stand it...*sniffle*
| Yellow Green Fish chapter 1 . 9/3/2015
Even though we know the truth behind Natsu not being able to pass through Freed's runes, this is still a super touching story TT
loved it a lot! Keep up the good work!
| Go check under your bed chapter 1 . 8/25/2015
Why you must crush my heart. ;_;
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/23/2015
That was absolutely, heartbreakingly beautiful! I'M CRYING! WHY DID YOU HAVE TO DO THIS!? NATSU HAD BETTER GET LUCY IN THEIR NEXT LIVES AND EVERY LIFE AFTER THAT! I'm gonna go sob in the corner and eat a tub of ice-cream now...
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/21/2015
Wow, that was so sad but so beautiful. Very well written!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/20/2015
IM TOO YOUNG TO BE THIS EMOTIONALLY UNSTABLE. SERIOUSLY... EHAT THE HELL? HOW COULD YOU WRITE SOMTHING SO SAD? MY PILLOWS ALL WET BC OF YOU. AHRGG
| briskd chapter 1 . 8/18/2015
I wasn't even halfway through the fanfiction and I was in tears. This was written so beautifully and I weeped at not only the ending but at the way the words were just right. Natsu was displayed in his slightly childish way that many would see as annoying if not for his heart of gold. To sacrifice his future so that Lucy wouldn't hurt as he did was something I don't feel I could do. Lucy was beautiful in this and she fit the role of Wendy perfectly. Before this fanfiction I was falling out of Natsu and Lucy fanfictions and never really read tragedies but after this... that's another story. I would like to ask for a sequel but I know that would just take away the beauty and the mystery left behind from this ending. "By the riverside" in the end managed to pull another tear from my eye as the ending finished in such a beautiful way. I could imagine violins playing a beautiful piece to this. The fact that I was listening to watch?vLaJoDAXkSMw did not help at all. Even though I am crying, there is a small smile on my face. I can imagine a million life times with Natsu and Lucy; their own Peter and Wendy. This has to be my favourite NaLu and I doubt that will change. I could have never captured this story as beautifully as you did.
| Maomin chapter 1 . 8/17/2015
DAMN. THIS WAS HEARTBREAKINGLY BEAUTIFUL
IM SO HURT
BUT SO TOUCHED
| SherrySienna chapter 1 . 8/16/2015
I swear at first I will not kill you actually.. But..
DAMN HOW CAN YOU WRITE LIKE THIS IT'S UR FAULT MY PILLOW IS DRENCHED DAMN DAMN DAMNDAMNDAMN! I'LL KICK UR ASA I SWEAR!
| Guest chapter 1 . 8/12/2015
TT omfg. Ive been waiting for fairy tail dubbed for 3 months now so it's been a good while since I've read/watched about Natsu and Lucy. I literally just died when I read this bcoz it feels like their really dead
| m chapter 1 . 7/27/2015
i'm crying? it was truly a lovely story. thank you for sharing it with us :)
| mystery chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
So s a d
| Guest chapter 1 . 7/15/2015
I cryed. Correction I am crying while writing this