Reviews for Lily and the HalfBlood Prince
xXscarlettlilyXx chapter 44 . 3/26/2010
You have a great talent, and some amazing idea's!

Keep up the good work, and write lots more please!

Lily x
Really Cinderella chapter 44 . 3/26/2010
Great chapter! I feel a bit bad for Petunia although it would be rather funny.
ConsultingTimeLordIn221B chapter 44 . 3/26/2010
nice chapter. i rely liked how u showed more of sev's feelings for lily. can't wait for the next update! oh, and do u think you're going to write more stories after this during the Marauder Era? r james and the others going to come into this story soon? anyway, nice chapter! :D
excessivelyperky chapter 12 . 3/25/2010
Snape could have died on that broom. But he should have waited to find out if Potter and Black were going to be punished and then hexed them later. Now whenever he's hurt he'll be the one to be blamed while Potter and Black look like angels. I'm glad Lily still sees her friend's side about things and wants to defend him. I'll be sad when the Gryffindor common room propaganda machine finally wears her down and she decides Sev really is to blame for being the victim.
xXaFireInsideXx chapter 29 . 3/24/2010
I cannot begin to describe to you how much each chapter just keeps getting better - And I was hooked from the very first chapter!

I really love your characterisations of Lucius and Narcissa. And the dialogue between the Potter/Black duo and Sev/Lily was quite amusing.

Also, I'm loving the plot in you story. After the first few chapters I was afraid that it was just going to be on their day-to-day lives, but how wrong I was!
excessivelyperky chapter 11 . 3/22/2010
Excellent chapter. I do hope that Lily practices the laughing hex on Severus; he needs to laugh, even if it's under a spell.

There do seem to be a lot of deserted classrooms in Hogwarts; how badly is the Wizarding population declining over time?

All in all, another very good chapter.
ConsultingTimeLordIn221B chapter 43 . 3/20/2010
nice chapter. i liked the interaction between sev and lily when she was cleaning him up and how u showed them both growing older physically and internally. anyway, great chapter and plz update soon! you've been great with it! :D
ConsultingTimeLordIn221B chapter 42 . 3/20/2010
great chapter. i feel so sorry for lily! especially at the end when she finally saw severus in the room. i can't wait to read the next chapter so i can see what happens! :D
ConsultingTimeLordIn221B chapter 41 . 3/20/2010
great chapter. i luv more interaction between severus and his family and how it's blatant that severus is getting older. i also like how the weather outside was made to contradict everything going on inside of severus and the outside. thx for another great chapter and can't wait to read the next! :D
ConsultingTimeLordIn221B chapter 39 . 3/20/2010
great chapter. sry it took so long to read this but ive been busy. anyway, gr8 chapter & i can't wait to continue reading! :D
excessivelyperky chapter 10 . 3/19/2010
Excellent chapter-nice that Potions worked out so well, at least for now. I'm sure Sluggy will find some kind of reason to amplify Lily's contribution and denigrate Snape's, but not just yet. After all, there are two rich purebloods in back he hasn't discovered he needs to suck up to yet. However, Sluggy didn't get as far as he has by going against the Headmaster's wishes, and I'm sure he realizes that his compliance is helping him keep his position. I noted that even though he's Head of House, he hasn't bothered talking to his first year students yet.

I thought Snape would be in the same Charms and Transfiguration classes-aren't Slytherin and Gryffindor always together?

A very positive chapter; sad it won't last long.
Really Cinderella chapter 42 . 3/17/2010
Poor Severus! Great chapter!
excessivelyperky chapter 9 . 3/14/2010
Very good chapter; a pity that Lily is so quick to blame Severus for _her_ reading the letter and throwing it up at her sister. Of course she wants her sister to love her; Lily's used to being loved by everybody. How fortunate for her that she's in the House that's so well loved by everyone else at school. In a way, it's also fortunate that Snape is in Slytherin; there's no chance of him being loved by anyone, ever, except of course for Lily. When she remembers to.

But she'll continue to think that anything bad that happens is going to be his fault anyway, isn't she?
Really Cinderella chapter 41 . 3/13/2010
I doubt that Lilly is lying to Severous so could something be wrong with the mirrors? However I doubt that is possible as well. Great chapter!
Really Cinderella chapter 40 . 3/10/2010
I just read this and I love it! I always wondered how Snape went into dark magic and you have a nice spin on that.
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