Reviews for A Lonely Path
Mkitkat chapter 2 . 10/4/2009
I'm really interested please keep updating!
story2tell chapter 2 . 10/4/2009
OMG! How dare you stop it there!
depending chapter 2 . 10/4/2009
oh. my. god.

i can't wait to read the next chapter!

This was so original, and so well written.

: D
LilyLunaEtheline chapter 2 . 10/4/2009
thats really good, but quite sad. i just want to ask, is it slash? also, how did harry run off? how was it that the trace broke? basically, im a bit confused, but want to find out more. please update soon


Ac 3000 chapter 2 . 10/4/2009
The beginning was pretty good
Farsi chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
I'm curious as to where Harry went. And why he's so resistant after he's found. And how Remus fits into all this. Hope to find out soon!
ikot-ikot chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
"And so, making up her mind, she turned on her heal, strode quickly over to the door and wrenched it open."

Heal should be heel.

Anyway, great start. Try to make your next chapter a little longer if you can. I can't wait how this will end up and I always love Remus-Harry fics :)

I read your bio and I do hope you do these characters some justice. Hopefully you'll stick around long enough to finish a few decent fics.


SlytherinLuna chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
quite a promising start (and rather original too!)

Is the story going to be from the adults' POV instead of Harry's? that might be interesting...
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