|Reviews for Breathe|
| sassyfriend chapter 2 . 1/17
I loved this story. Will you do more stories?
| sassyfriend chapter 1 . 1/17
I wondered if he had problems after that!
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/21/2013
Gosh I'm glad someone wrote a fic about this. It's a great job too :)
| Starsinger chapter 1 . 9/9/2013
This is good, but I'm going to point out the BIG mistake here. This is a Constitution Class Starship. The Galaxy Class is not built for another EIGHTY years for the time of the Next Generation. If you're not a Trekkie, how are you confusing the two? They look VERY different. Check out "Star Trek Dribbles and Drabs" for a picture of the Galaxy Class. Good story otherwise.
| Dairi chapter 2 . 7/22/2013
Hehe, typical Kirk to not think anything of an injury...then it turns out to be possibly deadly. Eeks.
Thanks for sharing!
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/15/2013
I've read this story about ten times since you first posted it, and I like it just as much today as I did the first time I clicked on it. It's some good writing, in my opinion.
| Acrylate chapter 2 . 6/11/2013
I love sick/whump Kirk. Please make another one. Thank you
| sami1010220 chapter 2 . 6/9/2013
Lol, I don't know who to feel worse for, kirk or mccoy
| c0pypa5ted3lete chapter 2 . 6/1/2013
i just love it when people pick up on minor details and elaborate on them! you did so well with the little information you had, and I loved this story! no, the end wasn't too abrupt, and frankly I thought it fit well with the plot. very original! thanks for writing this! :)
| wotumba1 chapter 2 . 5/31/2013
| Chipmunk94 chapter 2 . 5/28/2013
Spock needs to be a little more Vulcan. I don't think the Vulcan's speak with contractions. Of course, I could be wrong, but it just seems weird. Other than that, well done.
| Lord-Cas chapter 2 . 5/27/2013
I loved this! Hurt!Kirk and concerned McCoy are the best
| Cello06 chapter 2 . 5/24/2013
great story! i was thinking about the same thing at the end of the movie...
| Arweyn chapter 2 . 8/27/2012
What a lovely fanfic :D It was really enjoyable to read and I love the idea! Thank you for writing it 3
| Mulderette chapter 2 . 7/15/2012
Great story. I liked it a lot :)