Reviews for Generation XI
TWIZTEDCONTINUED chapter 12 . 12/28/2009
Well anyway i think, that when they go to fight Byakuran (if they do if you want them to only my suggestion) That they go cause ,well basiclly after they fight Kuro and see the flashback "I" litterally think he should'nt go to prison .That even though they already have the vongola rings in the future they go and try to collect the one's there teen parents have so they i don't know try to change the future but the whole reason they fight Byakuran is because he wants the V-Ringsto so yeah.
TWIZTED chapter 12 . 12/28/2009
In overall, i really,REALLY, think this is a good story. You see it's both funny and suspenseful. Still I really love this story you see LOVE,this story. But, for a request,I read the reviews and i agree with La la la, They should go back to meet there parent's to defeat Byakuran,but this is kind of 2-parted, so i'll probaly do another review,but if they do show the past, i think Kiyohiko should turn semi- evil after seeing the probaly bloodshed of the past that he adapts to the mafia boss roll.
Just call me BLANK chapter 12 . 12/27/2009
I really belive this story has good potential and that you should continue to do the story. And it literally is touching that hibari did that for Kumiko. (crying in corner...) But, seriously it's a good story, plese continue(WIDE YAMAMOTO SMILE!)
anonomyous chapter 12 . 12/27/2009
I really believe this is a good story and that you should continue it and maybe make the chapters a little bit longer and a suggestion is to bring a little of the plot out so the readers know a little but still want to read some more so that they do review. But anyway this is still one of the best fanfiction i have ever !
tsuna27 chapter 12 . 12/23/2009
May you please tell us what happened in the past, the action Hibari did in the past, and who is Kurokiri and what is his relationship with Kumiko?

I also want to see Tsuna in 11's generation with his family fighting.

I really want to know!

By the way this fanfic is awesome!

I hope that you would update it very soon. Onegai!
the Red King chapter 12 . 12/21/2009
hey how was Kiyo able to fly? Only Tsuna ans Xanxus can fly can kIyo use the weapn of the fifth and fly if so Kiyo is so coolD good chapter
angelxgirlx21 chapter 12 . 12/21/2009
maligayang pasko! yung path of destruction parang yung kay mukuro. parang pinagsama yung kokuyo arc at yung isang bahagi ng future arc. hindi ko siya masyado ma gets. sorry. haha. merry christmas uli XD
angelxgirlx21 chapter 11 . 12/16/2009
kamusta. maganda story mo XD. good luck din. napansin ko lang na ngayon lang ako nag koment. kawawa si kumiko. bakit yun ginawa ni kyoya?
missypuss89 chapter 11 . 12/13/2009
so kumiko call kuro "kuro-nii" as like a brother figure to her or something like that and does kurokiri is almost like mukuro
missypuss89 chapter 7 . 12/13/2009
im confused is kumiko chrome and hibari's daughter or is it mukuro and chrome's daughter and since when hibari married chrome i thought he hated mist people
la la laaaaaaaaaa t ba ba baaa chapter 11 . 12/13/2009
i really like this story and hope you continue and im happy that hibari did all this for kumiko and i really love this STORY(#
tugoarugo chapter 11 . 12/13/2009
so cool i love it. please continue . whos the cloud guardian and i just noticed this after reading the other reviews does mukuro have a son?
arugotugo random name chapter 11 . 12/13/2009
I really love this story im a huge fan love it and i vote for KiyohikoxHana
The ReBornStar chapter 11 . 12/13/2009
I really like this story once again. You inspired me to right Fan fiction again thank you very much and once again i vote for Kiyohikoxkumiko And TsubabxHana
the Red King chapter 11 . 12/13/2009
m Hibari really loves Kumiko to do that to her don't worry Dying will mode only last 5 minutes so the fight was good now i want to find out about the morte family
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