|Reviews for The Hill|
| H chapter 34 . 5/25/2013
| H chapter 3 . 5/23/2013
How you hate LAOL is absolutely beyond me...it was fantastic, as is everything you write. I sincerely hope that some day I'll get to read a real book written by you. Loving The Hill so far as well, but as I already said, everything you write is amazing so that's not even a surprise.
| Valmoni chapter 34 . 3/21/2013
been a while since i've managed to come back and finish this ... but i have and all i can say, in conclusion, is :)
| Enileme chapter 1 . 1/3/2013
I love your work! I've read all of them, but I was wondering...if your still writing...I know it was already a subplot, but are you ever going to expand on your "Sense and Sensibility" plot?
| vanillabean18 chapter 34 . 8/12/2011
Wooo, i get to be the 500th reviewer! i feel all cool inside, except for that this isn't letting me capitalise anything properly. that's annoying.
I love that your characters are so real and have so much depth. i can see how much effort you pour into them-i wish i was that dedicated.
Emilia and george made me want to cry from happy several times over, but i think that eli is my favourite, though i like eerin quite a bit too.
just out of curiosity, if eli and darcy had a kid, would it be a boy or a girl? and what would it's name be?
I put way too much thought into this.
Anyway, you'e got a serious gift for writing. i have to get up in six hours and should definitely have gone to bed three hours ago, but instead i am probably going to read an education. i really like the last chapter.
I'm going to shut up now.
| Lou-deadfroggy chapter 34 . 7/7/2011
I absolutely loved this story! You write brilliantly. The bits with Toni and Howl at school were a bit weird but that's the point. Just to say that after 16 that stuff is legal in England. Not with teachers but the age isn't a problem. I love it and you are a great writer.
| DayDreamer077 chapter 34 . 4/1/2011
well, that wasn't fair Eli and Darcy didn't have children. Oh shucks! Oh well...
| DayDreamer077 chapter 33 . 4/1/2011
they got married? wow! that was fast. lol. I guess...they were in a relationship for over 8 years. lol.
| DayDreamer077 chapter 32 . 3/31/2011
wow! he's worse than Darcy or Howl. One pout. ONE! Man! Dang! He's got it bad. I want that. lol.
| DayDreamer077 chapter 23 . 3/31/2011
omg! frank is like Wickham. where is the jerk these days? How about the Bennetts and Bingleys?
Can I make a suggestion? You don't have to take it if you don't want to.
I've been reading the last 23 chapters as well as the love and other labels and I notice you don't separate one setting to another. What I mean is I was reading the part where will is faxing something and another minute I was reading we were in Toni and Howl's bedroom talking about baby names. I was very confused and reread the scene a couple of times before I saw we realized what had happened. So can you use dashes or page breaks? I keep rereading things because I do not realize we are in a different setting than the previous paragraph or sentence? thank you!
| Blaidd Louveteau chapter 9 . 1/19/2011
Haha, don't worry, Frank the American would definitely know what badminton is. Just about every kid in the country is forced to play it in gym class at some time or another.
| RicardianScholar Clark-Weasley chapter 31 . 11/11/2010
i have to say you really made me cry in the last few chapters. i have a vindictive pleasure from listening to how the others banded together and beaten Frank up and kicked him and Jane out. it scares me sometimes how horrible people are to go out that far to ruin one person's life. the ending of the chapter was so sweet and brilliant though
| RicardianScholar Clark-Weasley chapter 13 . 11/10/2010
i really, really don't like Frank in this. i think he's arrogant in his skills to anaylise people and he seems to have a perverse joy in using it to play them. i do hope some point later in the fic George or someone else will give him a black eye. overall i'm enjoying this, it's brilliantly written as it's prequel though i'm developing the urge to punch several characters and shake Hayley.
| LadyLilibet chapter 34 . 8/26/2010
wow! Again another absolutely brilliant story/novel. I loved every second.
| it'stheremedies chapter 11 . 8/25/2010
I always pictured Eli slapping him and Darcy punching him in the face. I really don't know why but that's how I've pictured it.