|Reviews for Second Life|
| macisgate chapter 1 . 6/28/2013
Just finished watching this episode. What a wonderful story you've written! Loved it.
| reader chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
Nice job. Well-written and interesting perspective.
| USAFChief chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
I don't often review one shots, but this really touched me. This is really, really good. Very impressive use of words to paint the picture of Ziva craving a renewal and actually living it.
| Maybe-I-Should-Write-Something chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
Liked this story! But I think you meant 'potted plant' and not 'pot plant'...no matter how funny it sounds :)
| scottiedog chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
excellent one shot of Ziva's thoughts! :)
| Aquila1 chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
Very nicely done. Insightful and almost poetic in the way it's written. I enjoyed this very much. A lovely tag to a great episode.
| chrissyjoy chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
wow! really good!
| bloodredcherry chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
What a beautiful, evocative story.
| indiaga chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
Oh my God. This is seriously, truly, amazing. Beautiful, and so poetic, and haunting, and RIGHT. Favourite parts:
'Damocles, sycophant of Dionysius of Syria, when in envy of the good life was given a chance to sit in the King’s chair and enjoy his pleasures. And it was so. That is, until he looked up, and saw a sword hanging by a single hair above the throne.'
'are the thread to snap and bring me down upon them.
And snap I did.'
'My death was written in stone long before I got to him. Life was ending as the cargo plane took flight in Israel, shedding pieces along the ocean; it faded in a room without light and filled with sounds I could not will away.
I drowned in unmeasured time, waiting for the end.'
'What am I to do, with all this time?'
'Perhaps he is a good man. Perhaps not.
I think it is not for me to judge.'
I am home.'
Beautiful. Absolutely sublime.