|Reviews for Creeping Carlos|
| Blindmandonttelltales chapter 1 . 12/5/2009
nice, but i would not expect bree to say "just take me..." and i would think she would be a bit more resistant. i thought carlos could be more seducing than that...i expected the sex to be even hotter considering it is a bree and carlos...but it started out well in the beginning. keep up the good work!
| everhalcyon chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
interesting couple .. update soon!