Reviews for Fatal Temptation
MS chapter 1 . 10/15/2010
I have read orginal version and I liked it. I was annoyed at how bella was treateing poor jasper. I love jasper, and bella was behaving a litlle like mooron from orginal SM books. (i read fanfics that have better creation of her) but i wanted to know the end, find a happy ending with bella and jasper- no such luck. :/ Course the story in its self is good :)

And after reading your a/n i wanted to read rewrited version thought i'm not big fan of third persoon pov. And i must say it is very good :) I like it, sorry i get to read only one chapter:(
Taken.By.Edward chapter 1 . 10/6/2009
awsum
CowgirlKelly chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
i like the other story the way it was but i want to read this one too maybe it will be better :) update soon!
slc6548 chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Looking forward to this - really liked the original.
ChasingCharlie chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
this seems like it will be really good. update soon!
Vendell chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
I love this story and I'm so excited that you are rewriting/reworking it.

No one ever seems to think about how their feelings affect Jasper, I think it's great that he's curious about Bella.
Kathy Hiester chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
Good start.I have alerted the story.
luvinJazz chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
Great start to the story! Can't wait to read more, will definitely put on alerts.
barbiedoll123 chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
i like it
EclipsedbyJacob chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
Fantastic start! I love the lines from Romeo and Juliet. Very fitting after all! I'm excited to see where you go from here!
Rori Potter chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
Great start. Update soon.