Reviews for The Misfit Motorcycle Club: Speed Demon Edition
Detective's Heart chapter 1 . 12/19/2014
These Naoto and Yosuke biking friendship stories are immensely entertaining! Will there be another one?
Ulcaasi chapter 1 . 3/11/2013
HAH. Yosuke's a wimp XD
seiryux chapter 1 . 9/6/2012
What makes this story funnier for me is that The Golden will have the team riding around in motorbikes and Naoto specifically rides a motorcycle in her spin off novel, Persona X Detective.

Just a great and funny story all around.
P.T. Piranha chapter 1 . 6/26/2012
I like the chemistry between these two (as strained as it is), and that you didn't take the easy way out and shipped them. I have to wonder if stories involving being just friends are a dying breed sometimes.

Anyway, funny story.
Extra Gone chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
Oh man, that was hilarious! Naoto really has a knack for technology, and that even includes motorcycles: oh Naoto, you and your mechanics and Yosuke, being chill, only to suffer the ride of his life.

I could totally see Naoto naming something after classic writers. Who knew she had it in her to drive like a lunatic? Poor Yosuke! lol

Good stuff as always man.
BakaBlue chapter 1 . 1/31/2012
This could be hilairous in hindsight since everybody in persona 4 gets motorcycles in the latest game.

They fight shadows while riding motorcycles!

Damn you Motorcycles! Why must you ruin everything for me?
Sepsis chapter 1 . 10/11/2011
Oh god, that was so perfect! XDD

"As far as Yosuke was concerned, the only name the bike needed was My Awesome New Ride. He was about to tell Naoto this, except she was too busy running her hand over its engine with a really weird expression on her face." Haha.. And all of their bickering and just everything else was wonderful. ;)
Ikasury chapter 1 . 9/23/2011
out of curiosity, have you ever seen an anime called 'Kino no Tabi'? *glances* just saying, Kino and Naoto are practically clones and Kino has a talking motorcycle named hermes *glances the other way* just saying XD

although, i can totally see Naoto, not only being a total nerd for fixing up a busted bike, but being a rediculous speed demon simply because she has more techfinity then a technomage and has about half as much capacity for dealing with -slash- understanding 'normal' people XD hehe... oh Yosuke... you should have known better...

till next *salute-waves* Sayounara!

-Ikasury
missfmalulu chapter 1 . 8/6/2011
That was adorable and awesome! I love your style of writing :D
psychedelic aya chapter 1 . 12/16/2010
I enjoyed this immensely. I would have never thought of reading a YosukeNaoto friendship fic, but after this I'm craving for more.
Girly 411 chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
Hey! I finally made it to the comp to review!

Remember little old me? XD heheh...

anywhose... I really loved this one. It was too adorable! Naoto's a speed deamon. haha! Oh, and when she named the bike Sir Arthur Conan Doyle I think I almost fangirled there for a moment. heheh... Yosuke's comments were just way too funny... oh the innuendos. *smirk*

So yes, you kept the charries perfectly in character throughout the entire thing. I can totally picture Naoto as a mechanic-motorcycle-loving speedster. Wonder what Kanji'll think when he figures out what's happened.

heheh... I agree... he's so gonna kill Yosuke... and probably have a long talk with Naoto in which she'll completely brush aside in favor of Conan. *begins to imagine it* And I most definitely wonder what Souji'll say when he finds out his best friend was pwned by the "midget detective". D

Oh and I completely love the whole Kanji's cooking class reference in there. That's just amazing. heheh... Teddie... sry...

This was the perfect fic. Wonderfully done. Very wonderful job! *applauds your geniosity!* Keep it up.
Rayless Night chapter 1 . 12/30/2009
Nice! I like this one better than the previous, and that one was really good to start with.

Love Naoto here, how she starts personifying the motorbike, and the clear boundaries where she decides she's above the law. She's usually so disciplined, it's fun to see her getting hopelessly involved in something she loves. (It almost feels like she's going to draw up papers with Yosuke about the joint custody of Conan.)

And the Naoto-Yosuke dynamic is hilarious. Actually, the whole thing's hilarious, Motorcycle Whisperer, pillion-riding banana and acrobatic insides included.

Yosuke gets a motorcycle and gets to hold Naoto tight. Kanji's going to kill him.

Crit:

'"Wimp." She chuckled.' - Only saying this because speech is separate from laughter, even if she's doing both at once. But it's a really minor point and possibly subjective anyway.

This fic is so much fun to read. :)
Marcondiuw chapter 1 . 12/25/2009
Can't beblive I let this one split... Well, it's never too late, is it?

I loved your characterization of Naoto and Yosuke. Naoto's obsesion with the bike was a nice add to her personality. And you managed to make me picture her with a psychotic look that just made me laugh more than I wanted (it's already a little late around here).

Still, thanks for the image. Gotta head back and search for the first one now.
XxXTwilight-SinXxX chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
O-M-G that was abso-freaking-lutely amazing! I'm a bit ashamed I didn't review your previous one shot, but I couldn't keep quite on this. You did an amazing job with characterization! It was also filled with wit and humor, a perfect balance! Sadly it's rare to find friendship fics like these on this site. Seeing this really made my day :D

I really hope to see more of this!
Llane chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
sweet. totally sweet.

and for some reason, the bit about teddie cracked me up. XD
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