Reviews for Countdown
eatpandas.rawr chapter 1 . 10/6/2010
Wonderful, poetic, flows perfectly, and awesome.

Love it.
Arandomchan chapter 1 . 8/19/2010
I didn't play Chain of Memories and I can't for the life of me remember in what order they die, so I only recognized a few, but I kinda liked this. I would have found it easier to understand had it been according to rank, just because I'm more familiar with THAT line up, but I enjoyed how he just dismisses the first two, starts consoling himself, then realizes he's screwed once Axel dies.

No one misses the lightning storms

Kinda liked that bit.

"Someone with one eye shouldn't be able to shoot so well."

Yeah, huh?

However, the entire story was written a little off, like you wanted it to be in a certain place and it wasn't quite there, or maybe I just want it to be there...

Like... just taking

And as you fade in shades of gray, white, and black,

and turning it into

And as you fade [and you fade in shades of gray, white, black]

Or something.
Some Dude chapter 1 . 11/3/2009
Oh, good. You included Xion.
Kariya chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
I really like this story. Very good and very emotional.
That Old Account chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
This is one of the best things I have ever read. It is so full of emotion and it's
NinjaSheik chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
Blackrow Halls chapter 1 . 9/30/2009
I still like part I since it's kinda subtle that Vexen died and when Axel died, because he affected the candles. Though are you sure you didn't mean a tomahawk in part I instead of a sword? :s