Reviews for Upon a Star
ReillyScarecrowRocks chapter 13 . 7/22/2011
gah, Jack and Alvar need to stop pussyfooting about and realise they're meant to be together

excellent advice, Abigail *nods head in agreement*

love how you've managed to develop so many OC's that just fit with the story so well!

Autumn O'Shea Swan chapter 13 . 6/30/2011
Way to go Everly! I hope Alvar gets to them soon. And that Bendel's curse gets broken.
znk99fg7 chapter 12 . 3/15/2011
Yes a new chapter! I am in love with this story. Your writing is absolutley fabulous!

Write again soon xxx
Autumn O'Shea Swan chapter 12 . 3/12/2011
Aw! Alvar! He cares! I knew it.
L3ftOfCent3r chapter 12 . 3/12/2011
FINALLLLY an update! ;)

And...ummm...huh? Alvar, the ruthless warrior, comes from a cute little village with cheery people? *looks around* Uh, what? But, see! That just makes him even move lovable because he's just full of surprises. AND! Alvar the milkman...AHEM... *fans self* Love this chapter! Alvar's mother is just as wonderful as he is. Gotta love moms and their ways of telling on their children...especially if it's something you don't want to be told! You're such a great storyteller and your characters are so vivid! This story is AWESOME! Update soon!
L3ftOfCent3r chapter 11 . 2/14/2011
"He despised that here, she bowed herself like a true slave, without any fight, without that loveable defiance of hers."

YEESSSSSSSSS! Admit it already, Alvar-you're crazy about Jack! Yay, I'm so happy he saved her! Garris is a total creep! He deserves to be covered in vomit regularly. Ha, ha. LOL, that was awesome! Love it, love it!

Next chapter, please. ;)
Autumn O'Shea Swan chapter 11 . 2/12/2011
Well done. Poor Jack.
ReillyScarecrowRocks chapter 11 . 2/12/2011
i really like this story, it has everything a good story needs and it's really well written!

Exmoorpony chapter 11 . 2/12/2011
Great! Keep going! Everything's positively perfect! You have all my requirements for perfection in fact.

- romance, but not lemons

- a plucky heroine (Jack)

- a giggly girl character (Everly)

- an awful villain

- a changing villain/hero

Please write more!
znk99fg7 chapter 10 . 2/6/2011
I have not been able to function since you wrote the last chapter! I often check to see if you've posted it and I am not ashamed to say do a happy dance when you have :D Great chapter x
L3ftOfCent3r chapter 10 . 2/4/2011
ZzzOMG! You updated! Yay!

Hmmm. So, was Bendel cursed with "multiple personality disorder", or what? Geez, his mood swings could give a girl wiplash! Poor Everly, but lucky for her he doesn't know that she's half-star. *GASP* What would he do if he did! And, Garris! He was just going to let Alvar die! And, Alvar is still doing business with him! WHY? I guess he doesn't know that Garris was just going to let him drown, but I wonder...if he did...would he still be in it for the money? Man, he needs to let it go! Jack saved his life! I think there's some kind of debt to be paid for that! ALVAR, SAVE JACK!

Anywayz, that was great, as usual! Keep going! Can't wait to read the next chapter! ;)


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Autumn O'Shea Swan chapter 10 . 2/3/2011
Hmm. Wondering what Garris is going to do.
L3ftOfCent3r chapter 9 . 1/24/2011
I was smiling like a fool when Capt. Shakespeare switched dancing partners on Jack. And, like Jack, my heart rate shot-up when she found herself in Alvar's arms! Whew! If that's not a testimony to some great writing and storytelling...I don't know what is! I'm sad there is no longer a "next" button for me to click, but I will be waiting by my inbox for the next update. Words can not describe how much I am loving this story! Please continue, I will be your avid reader!

L3ftOfCent3r chapter 8 . 1/24/2011
*sigh* I love this story so much. I felt all warm and bubbly reading this chapter. The whole Alvar/Everly relationship is precious. Alvar and Jack are fun. And, of course, the wise captain once again sees what the two of them have yet to see. Wonderful! And, I love the bit after Everly's eyes sparkling at night in a non-humanly way. So cool! And, finally I know why Tristan and Yvaine let their child go. Makes perfect sense. Pure genius! I will never question your plot motives again! And, Bendel? He's such a tragic villain. A victim too, I guess, but he's killed so many poor stars...I don't know how he could be forgiven. This story is AH-MAY-ZING! I love it 100 times more than the book (no offense to Gaiman). Of course, I liked the movie better than book, anyway, because the book made me feel sad after reading it. I am soooo glad I decided to read this! My "Stardust" experience just wouldn't be complete if I hadn't. LOVE IT!
L3ftOfCent3r chapter 7 . 1/24/2011
"It seemed all they had wanted to do was say they had made someone walk the plank, not exactly killed them." LOL!

Awesome! Your characterizations of Capt. Shakespeare and his crew was perfect! And, he recognized Everly as Tristan and Yvaine's daughter! What is going on here? I mean, really! What the heck are the king and queen of Stormhold doing! Grrr! And, I do so have hopes that your wonderful Alvar saves Lady Jack from the twisted Lord Garris. *crosses fingers*

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