Reviews for The Revenge Job
kitcool chapter 2 . 8/16/2010
interesting write more its good
ponyperson chapter 2 . 10/1/2009
UM is this a script or a story? I like the plotline, but the script format frankly is boring as it really takes away from the emotions of the characters. Also, I don't ever see Eliot saying "thanks for going to the store, I appreciate it" and Parker saying "I enjoy being your gopher girl" . That really is not in character. At best their would be snarky sarcasm, most likely grunts and insults that hide the "thanks" part of things.

I think this would be a good story, but not in script format and stay in character.