Reviews for Something in the Way She Moves
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
I'm glad someone remembers Marlene; it's hard to be a red-shirt in the Wizarding World. Thank you for doing so.
lyin chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
nice fic! first off, interesting look at Benjy Fenwick possibly the most ignored Order character in fanfiction; and your descriptions of Hestia & Marlene (slightly cross-eyed) are terrifically detailed, making them very, very real, even though Marlene here is only present in their memories. overall your sense imagery is very strong Sirius' smell, Gideon's smiling back from around the mouth of the bottle...

i also liked the hinted Hestia/Fabian pairing, and especially, Sirius' desire for - and capacity for- revenge, which here was a great reflection of him later in life, especially the "She was one of us... If it'd been him" speech, which was both perfectly fitted to this scene and a terrific mirror to his speech about loyalty to Peter in the Shrieking Shack in PoA. and good title, too the Beatles are always great inspiration. thanks for the read! good luck & keep writing :)