Reviews for Something in the Way She Moves
excessivelyperky chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
I'm glad someone remembers Marlene; it's hard to be a red-shirt in the Wizarding World. Thank you for doing so.
lyin chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
nice fic! first off, interesting look at Benjy Fenwick~ possibly the most ignored Order character in fanfiction; and your descriptions of Hestia & Marlene (slightly cross-eyed) are terrifically detailed, making them very, very real, even though Marlene here is only present in their memories. overall your sense imagery is very strong ~ Sirius' smell, Gideon's smiling back from around the mouth of the bottle...

i also liked the hinted Hestia/Fabian pairing, and especially, Sirius' desire for - and capacity for- revenge, which here was a great reflection of him later in life, especially the "She was one of us... If it'd been him" speech, which was both perfectly fitted to this scene and a terrific mirror to his speech about loyalty to Peter in the Shrieking Shack in PoA. and good title, too ~ the Beatles are always great inspiration. thanks for the read! good luck & keep writing :)