Reviews for Descent
socialgirl378 chapter 4 . 12/29/2015
Well, this is making me more glad Danny and Clockwork were able to change the past.
Bibbledoo chapter 1 . 9/9/2014
No pun intended. Or was it?
InnerInstinct chapter 4 . 2/5/2013
Omg, this was so beautiful. TUE never gets old to me, and this was a wonderful way to relieve my favorite parts. Nice and simple.
PrincessBetty01 chapter 4 . 8/31/2012
...you left me speechless. o.O; *Runs out of the house and hides in the secret government's basement*
Unknown chapter 4 . 2/22/2012
Wow...

I'm literally speechless. That entire story was amazing.

The first chapter: The more I read, the more sad I got. Dang, I was almost in tears by the end. Which is good! I loved how you made Danny start losing control and repeating phrases like "my fault." That really makes an angst story all that much better. Also, great grammer and spelling.

The second chapter: I was a little confused at first, but then my slow mind finally caught up to me xD. I especially loved how you ended some of the paragraphs with dashes, it just gave this chapter a sense of urgency or something. I also loved how you described how Dan was created, emphsising certain words and such. Amazing.

The third chapter: Yeah, Vlad might have been a little OOC in this one xD. I loved how Dan and Danny interacted with each other. It was great. Danny's death was also fun to read xD

The fourth chapter: OH MY GOSH YES. You explained everything so beautifully, the voices of Jazz and the others, Danny's body, just everything was great. My favorite part: No humanity. The voices had stopped." Just great. Also, I loved how Dan was explaining himself to the voices.
Cipher Nine chapter 4 . 11/6/2010
Pheww... *shivers*

That was creepy, but I loved it.
xXxMartelxXx chapter 4 . 5/28/2010
Okay, those last two lines were powerful. o_o
xXxMartelxXx chapter 3 . 5/28/2010
O:
xXxMartelxXx chapter 2 . 5/28/2010
Those were some sweetly poetic descriptions!
xXxMartelxXx chapter 1 . 5/28/2010
ASDGFAD;RF

What. I. Wow.

You write so wonderfully, everything flowed subtly and so full of emotion.
Garnet Sky chapter 4 . 10/1/2009
Can't wait to read next year's entry.
Donteatacowman chapter 4 . 10/1/2009
Oh. Excellent job. The horror turns to disgust momentarily at the beginning of Chapter 4, but I can honestly say that that's the kind of thing Dark Dan (as we call him) would plausibly have done, and what would prompt Plasmius to leave it unsaid.

Aside from the heart thing, superb tale, and so tragic, too. Thanks for writing.
bluename chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
WOW! That had me tense all the way through. Very well written.

I can see how Danny had tried suicide but I never expected Vlad to agree with it :S great job :D

Happy Angst Day n_n
AnneriaWings chapter 4 . 10/1/2009
This was pretty dang angsty. A little short in some parts, but overall it was a fun read. Thanks for writing :D