|Reviews for Pancakes: Discovery|
| scaryrobots chapter 1 . 12/20/2013
I love the series.
I am kinda sad you never wrote anymore John/Cameron fics.
| dragon90slayer chapter 1 . 7/28/2013
Good job with this short series man. I liked how it wasn't just romance and that there was humor in it too. Don't get me wrong, I like the romance, its just that most of the TSCC fanfics on this site are either action or romance and its nice to have a change of pace. Keep writing man, you have talent :)
| badkidoh chapter 1 . 5/22/2011
| omgahitsbritt08 chapter 1 . 5/17/2011
I love this ending! John goes all possessive. I wish more authors would use that line you have. " Ordinarly, no, I wouldnt. But if you try to hurt the woman I love, I dont see how I could trust you enough to let you live. LOVE IT!
Regardless of who it is Derek his mom. I like how Cameron comes first!
The hilarity of John and Cameron not caring if they are loud! Love that part.
I wonder if there is a fic out there of Cameron getting pregnant.
| Gotham Siren chapter 1 . 6/2/2010
Make a part four please! You do this so well!
| Dragon Seraphin chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
Hey, just wanted to let you know, after a while of seeing all of your stories online labeled pancakes... i finially decided to read them... UTTERLY FANTASTIC! I Wish you would continue with another sequel to this one... one where John and Cameron could just be them.. I literally laughed out loud when the part came up "Do you want me to throw up" LMFAO "You Asked!" LOL! That was hilarious! I want more... lol... please come up with more. I beg of you :-D
| The1Russter chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
I've enjoyed this pancake trilogy a lot. Very good story. Thanks for taking the time to write the third part.
| Starkillah chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
I really enjoyed reading all of your three pancakes-stories.
Now you should go back to the roots:
How about Cameron cooking pancakes for John infront of Sarah?
She could then feel like Cameron is replacing her as a mother...
I'm pretty sure Sarah wouldn't like that.
Of couse something like this would cause another wave of troubles;)
I hope to see another pancakes-story soon.
| LoT56 chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
Very good series, I saw the latest story and read all three. All were very well written and entertaining. I always like reading about Sara and Derek freaking out.
| Renderer chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
What a beautiful little trilogy!
Thanks for the nice and gentle Jameron, and I'm sure it doesn't have to be *the* end. So, if you have it on your mind, sequel is a MUST. :)
| TK-MR chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
Wow, very nice work.
You can develop this to a series, base on John and Cameron relationship. Bring in the T-1001Weaver, John Henry, Ellison... make it a more complete series. :D
| olischulu chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
Very funny Storys.
You can write another sequel with Cameron is getting pregnant. Dereks reaction would be very very funny.