Reviews for Starting Over
KatastrophicKat chapter 20 . 9/12/2014
I'm going to channel Sheldon Cooper here...
If they'd had the adhesive ducks, there would have been no falling.

They make them in pink...

Careless hotel lol
SherlockedTardis94 chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
Lovin this pairing!
Legolas' Girl 31 chapter 31 . 5/28/2012
Awesome story, I loved it. Keep up the great work. Now off to read the sequel.

Dani
Hailey C. Black chapter 4 . 1/18/2012
""Let him sleep for a few minutes. You and I need to talk," he said, holding my hand as he pushed his seat forward to let me out. Helping me out of the car he closed the door gently, still hiding my hand in his."

The impala has four doors. I Googled it to make sure of this fact. Dean would not have needed to 'put his seat forward' because Bella had her own door to get out of. And Dean's seat wouldn't have been able to move forward like you were obviously thinking, anyway. You have many other grammar mistakes, so I don't know why I'm pointing this out. It just bothered me.
Jasperbells chapter 4 . 10/12/2011
yayay! They kissed! Loving this so far!
Jasperbells chapter 2 . 10/12/2011
Onto the next chapter! Are Dean and Bella gonna hook up?
Jasperbells chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
Curious to see what happens next!
Miss Snazzy chapter 13 . 6/14/2011
I wonder if Edward would actually kill Dean? Hmm...
Miss Snazzy chapter 12 . 6/14/2011
Good chapter. I noticed that you said "Alice can read minds…"

I'm assuming that was a mistake, so I thought I'd point it out.

I wonder what "punishment" Dean has in store for Bella. I'm betting Dean wasn't having innocent thoughts when Edward was around...
Miss Snazzy chapter 11 . 6/14/2011
Great chapter. I love Dean and Bella! )
Miss Snazzy chapter 10 . 6/14/2011
Good chapter. I did not expect the call to go quite like that. I wonder what Edward told them. 0.o
Miss Snazzy chapter 9 . 6/14/2011
Loved the kiss! I'm glad they didn't just ignore it and their attraction to each other. I'm betting that was Alice on the phone...
Miss Snazzy chapter 8 . 6/14/2011
I can't imagine how horrible it will be for Bella to ask the Cullens for help. After everything they did to her...

Good chapter.
Miss Snazzy chapter 7 . 6/14/2011
I'm surprised Bella gave in so easily after taking off like that, but this was still a good chapter.
Miss Snazzy chapter 6 . 6/13/2011
I have to say, I loved that Bella didn't let herself be taken there and fought her way out of the car. I am surprised she would just let herself get ran over, though. I wonder if one of the boys will save her, or if Alice had a vision and it's her behind the wheel? Hmm...
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