|Reviews for Welcome to the Jungle|
| Duesal10 chapter 1 . 1/8
Great work as usual.
You have very good ideas in general. Makes me wish that I could think in the same way that you do.
| Dummy chapter 1 . 5/5/2013
Jaw-breaking. Cannot comprehend how well done this is
| Iron Monkey Fist chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
| Aine Ninian chapter 1 . 11/8/2011
Unusual but cute. It's nice to think that the council members weren't always such asses (donkeys)
| Nemrut chapter 1 . 10/16/2011
Nice introspective, I never gave that much thought to Hiruzen's teammates except that they were unlikable
| Chouko Chango chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
"The real reason Tobirama has white hair: his students." HAHAHAHAHAHA. i like that
| X59 chapter 1 . 6/25/2011
| Willow-Bee the Cat chapter 1 . 10/20/2009
Nice. Liked the paralels you made.
| SkywardShadow chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
I never, ever, ever tire of your Team Tobirama insights. They're endlessly funny, believable and creative.
I laughed pretty hard at several of these, but I think my favorite was number 17, the ending in particular:
'Tobirama takes one look at them squabbling and realises Konoha is doomed.'
| GlitterPen chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
Oh, I love this. Thanks for the insightful look into the past.
| JayceeRising chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
Oh look -rolls eyes- It's GoodyTwoShoes again...
Anway... this was funny and a little sad at the same time.
I love number 2: Tsunade being a nightmare as a kid, and 17. Tobirama thinking that Konoha is doomed because of his students. Add 18 too. Lol Konoha is STILL standing... just keep ignoring them Tobirama!
Also love the reason why Tobirama has white hair XD
| Rena the pirate jedi wizard chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
Hahahahah! Oh, I love how Tobirama has white hair because of them. You know, it really is sad how far Kaharu and Homura seem to fall. Yes, their grandkids will succeed where they could not. They will not forget what it is to be young. Yay for nearly having nervious break downs.
| GoodyTwoShoes chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
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