|Reviews for The Fog|
| NO chapter 1 . 1/21/2015
I don't like the ending. I cannot, and will not accept that! Rose Tyler is so much stronger than that! If the Doctor actually did that, she wouldn't have even considered going back! At least without making him beg a little. (I mean a LOT). Either way, that ended up just too perfect for the Doctor. I wanted him to feel PAIN over what he did to Rose. He had a great time with Madame Pompous and when she left he immediately went to Rose, no consequences what so ever.
Just saying. Great story. Crap ending.
| berry chapter 2 . 12/28/2014
team rose. although she is behaving a little aggressively and immaturely in the first chapter, she's still my fave.
| berry chapter 2 . 10/13/2014
| berry chapter 6 . 7/8/2014
(although, to be honest, it's only for your bet. don't tell.)
| GUEST chapter 9 . 2/25/2014
I think for you to understand what's wrong with this story, you must read through all of Rose's dialogue. In this story she's whiny. She's catty. She's ungrateful. She's nothing like herself. There's nothing to her which is truly unique in this piece of writing, which turns her into an uninteresting, annoying character who it's not possible to relate to on any level.
| Whattt chapter 4 . 1/16/2014
I am team rose.
Reinette is a fucking bastard man stealer and is totally faking her and roses friendship
| Guest chapter 7 . 11/26/2013
| Guest chapter 4 . 11/26/2013
rose always rose the bad wolf the valent child and if i keep going this will never end
| Guest chapter 5 . 9/16/2013
Always team rose.
| Perks of Being a Whovian chapter 3 . 8/23/2013
This would be a good story if you didn't over-exaggerate the accents so much, but the constant use of 'ya' makes it borderline unreadable, for me...
| TheOncomingWolf chapter 9 . 6/18/2013
Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay!
That is all I have to say.
| TheOncomingWolf chapter 6 . 6/18/2013
Love bad-ass Torchwood Rose! The Doctor will always miss Rose!
Team Rose x
| TheOncomingWolf chapter 5 . 6/18/2013
Nonononono! Wrong girl! He wouldn't change for Rose but he would for Reinette? Seriously?! Good story x
| TheOncomingWolf chapter 4 . 6/18/2013
Still team Rose , good so far!x
| TheOncomingWolf chapter 2 . 6/18/2013
Team Rose defo! x