Reviews for To Reflect Perfection
SpiralBoundScribe chapter 12 . 3/5/2011
Go BB! And great ending-a dash of humor never hurts
SpiralBoundScribe chapter 11 . 3/5/2011
Nice! Soo intense! More, more, more!
SpiralBoundScribe chapter 10 . 3/5/2011
Oh no!
SpiralBoundScribe chapter 9 . 3/5/2011
I'm just as confused as he is...
SpiralBoundScribe chapter 8 . 3/5/2011
You did great with the Tai Chi. It completely fits her, and I'm glad you bothered to do it properly rather than making things up. Best chapter so far!
SpiralBoundScribe chapter 7 . 3/5/2011
Save him Raven!
SpiralBoundScribe chapter 6 . 3/5/2011
Yea! Tell him B!
SpiralBoundScribe chapter 5 . 3/5/2011
Whaaaa? Weird much!
SpiralBoundScribe chapter 4 . 3/5/2011
Sad...It doesn't have to be that way...
SpiralBoundScribe chapter 3 . 3/5/2011
Oh Beast Boy, you were doing so well...
SpiralBoundScribe chapter 2 . 3/5/2011
Poor BB. He is not a mascot! shakes fist at Clayface
SpiralBoundScribe chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Whoa. That was depressing lol. Better luck next time B!
Eragon chapter 11 . 2/20/2011
Sir Alwick, when you created the name 'Slaven,' did you combine Slade and Raven?
Shorty and KG Inc chapter 12 . 2/10/2011
Shorty: This was awesome!

KG: I especially liked that last line.
HaiJu chapter 12 . 2/6/2011
Darnit, you're ruining my self-held standard of hating romance fics. :P

This was very intriguing, funny and well-written. You made Beast Boy feel absolutely smitten without making it annoying or unbelievable, and handled the relationship delicately enough that it felt like a maturing relationship without clashing with their established personalities. I really liked the thought and detail you put into Raven's empathy and the history of the Possessors. I thought the date on the roof was a little over-the-top even for a possessed BB, but that was the point, wasn't it?

Also, kudos for referencing art, acting and literature. Fanfics ironically enough tend to be too self-contained.

Well done. I applaud you.

~ Hj
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