Reviews for To Reflect Perfection
SpiralBoundScribe chapter 6 . 3/5/2011
Yea! Tell him B!
SpiralBoundScribe chapter 5 . 3/5/2011
Whaaaa? Weird much!
SpiralBoundScribe chapter 4 . 3/5/2011
Sad...It doesn't have to be that way...
SpiralBoundScribe chapter 3 . 3/5/2011
Oh Beast Boy, you were doing so well...
SpiralBoundScribe chapter 2 . 3/5/2011
Poor BB. He is not a mascot! shakes fist at Clayface
SpiralBoundScribe chapter 1 . 3/5/2011
Whoa. That was depressing lol. Better luck next time B!
Eragon chapter 11 . 2/20/2011
Sir Alwick, when you created the name 'Slaven,' did you combine Slade and Raven?
Shorty and KG Inc chapter 12 . 2/10/2011
Shorty: This was awesome!

KG: I especially liked that last line.
HaiJu chapter 12 . 2/6/2011
Darnit, you're ruining my self-held standard of hating romance fics. :P

This was very intriguing, funny and well-written. You made Beast Boy feel absolutely smitten without making it annoying or unbelievable, and handled the relationship delicately enough that it felt like a maturing relationship without clashing with their established personalities. I really liked the thought and detail you put into Raven's empathy and the history of the Possessors. I thought the date on the roof was a little over-the-top even for a possessed BB, but that was the point, wasn't it?

Also, kudos for referencing art, acting and literature. Fanfics ironically enough tend to be too self-contained.

Well done. I applaud you.

~ Hj
Eragon chapter 12 . 2/1/2011
Please don't be offended, but is Darion gay?
Zinala chapter 12 . 1/30/2011
Oh that last line was priceless x]
Tears of Jade chapter 12 . 1/18/2011
"I doubt I could have wrestled him away from his husband." That totally made my day! I laughed so hard I couldn't breathe! Great story. Kept me guessing till the very end.
ForestGuardian311 chapter 12 . 11/24/2010
Wow...

Another magnificent piece! I believe that this story not only captured Beast Boy and Raven's relationship, but it also taught the importance of being happy with who you are. I think this story really touched me, in a way. I know that when I look into a mirror, I too, am sometimes dissatisfied with how I look. But this story made me realize that maybe perfection isn't all it's cracked up to be, and in the end, as cliched as it sounds, it truly is better to be yourself and be happy with who you are.

Thank you for writing such a wonderful story!

You are an amazing author; keep it up!
muddie chapter 12 . 9/27/2010
I loved this story. The care and attention to detail had me riveted to your story. I always love a story when it is clear that its author has spent lots of time and effort on it, even when it isn't really good. The plot structure and the little hints and foreshadowing you did in the earlier chapters clearly shows me that you are a meticulous author who has spared no effort in ensuring that your story is as close to perfection as possible. And indeed, it is a true work of art.

PS. Coincidentally, 'Just the Way You Are' was playing on the radio as I read the last chapter. Doesn't it fit? :)
Guest chapter 12 . 9/20/2010
I barely ever leave reviews but I just wanted to say that this was by far the best fanfic I have ever read. You truely are a master of your craft and I wish you success in all your future endeavours
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