|Reviews for Love of a Spartan: After the War|
| Twinkie216 chapter 2 . 3/12
I look forward to more action. Different types of action, too. Muhahahaha. I love hiow long these chapters are.
| Twinkie216 chapter 1 . 3/12
Urgh! I've always loved this story! Gosh! I read it on Archive, but there weren't as many chapters, so I'm now reading it on here. This is such a good story. I love John's characer, and the plot line. Sigh...it's fantastic.
| skieet chapter 1 . 2/23
Need up date pllllllzzzzz
| GuntherRiechwald chapter 48 . 2/20
Damn, this is good, keep up the good work. Your understanding for military doctrine has greatly advanced too, except for the one hiccup with radio chatter (probably heard this before)
"Over" signifies you are done with your sentence and are waiting for the other person to respond
"Out" is signifying that the conversation is over.
It isn't "over and out", its one or the other.
Example: "Olympus, this is Hacksaw requesting immediate fire support on grid 4624, ten rounds, fire for effect, over."
"Request sent on fire support for grid 4624, ten rounds, firing for effect, fifteen seconds to impact, over."
"Target hit confirmed, Olympus, thanks for the support, over."
"Understood, Olympus out."
Not exactly right, but you get the point, anyway good luck out there in the field.
| cameron.akana chapter 35 . 2/15
I found a song to describe this fanfic from my point of view its called drop the word by lil Wayne
| cameron.akana chapter 48 . 2/13
What the hell is wrong with you I don't like this u better make more chapters at this 20 more
| Guest chapter 48 . 1/29
When is the next one coming out!
| Auralee chapter 48 . 12/22/2013
Ok, I will admit, once I started reading this chapter, I felt sick. REALLY sick. The so-horrified-I'm-about-to-lose-my-lunch kinda sick. Props to you for inducing that kind of an emotional reaction in your readers. Having said that...WHAT WERE YOU THINKING?! Haven't those two been through enough already, why'd you have to shoot them down in the middle of a crossfire for? I've half a mind to send Blade after you for that! (lol j/k, obviously).
I sincerely hope there's a happy ending in store here...Auralee
| Lady Aeries chapter 48 . 12/17/2013
Great chapter! Had me on my toes trying to read and process everything that was happening. Thoroughly enjoyed the different reactions from Kelly, Green, Renee's squad and the ODSTs. The raw emotion and actions from John and Renee was the highlight of the chappie though.
Well done! Can't wait to see what happened after the shockwave.
| Link's Rose chapter 48 . 12/17/2013
You're an evil, evil person! Another cliffhanger! *creys* nooo... (on a side note, I'm entirely stuck on the Pillar of Autumn in Halo: CE. I've really gotten into it :P)
| Makkenna Witwicky chapter 48 . 12/17/2013
I am so done! Why you gotta end it like that! It was so exciting and now I need to know now! Please update soooon!
| Sada.Fire chapter 48 . 12/17/2013
So much suspense in this chapter! John is in such a critical state, I'm getting so nervous! The ODST's better run their asses mad quick to their aid. But that grav hammer... that grav hammer... EHRMYGASH THEY BETTER BE OKAY MINUS THE BRUTE. Renee and John are already critical. D: Awaits next time of Love of a Spartan.
| lynda.key1 chapter 48 . 12/17/2013
Oh my! Glad John and Renee are alive but now my heart has stopped again! Please post again soon. The suspense is killing me!
| yogo-sha chapter 48 . 12/17/2013
Woah clip hanger after clip hanger! You better hurry up writing!
| Guest chapter 47 . 12/5/2013
Wow your story is so amazing, I'm glad you've posted another chapter, and I hope you have another ready soon, I can't express how well your writing ability is, I feel like I'm there and I'm dieing to read the next bit, great job and keep up the good work