Reviews for Eternal Love
countdooku123 chapter 9 . 9/21
its ok you did nothing wrong i hope you get a new computer it a good story keep it up
Sdqz chapter 14 . 4/3/2015
Ÿ̤ö̤ṳ̈ c̤̈ä̤n̤̈ ḧ̤ä̤v̤̈ë̤ N̤̈ä̤ruto ẗ̤ö̤ l̤̈ö̤ö̤k̤̈ l̤̈ï̤k̤̈ë̤ ë̤r̤̈z̤̈ä̤ f̤̈r̤̈ö̤m̤̈ F̤̈ä̤ï̤r̤̈ÿ̤ T̤̈ä̤ï̤l̤̈ ä̤n̤̈d̤̈ N̤̈aruto have erzas magic and also her red hair and stuff and that she used to be married to Jellal who was an Uchiha that never died and that naruto jates him because he killed their first child
dark blue princess chapter 15 . 4/29/2014
For all those who will read this besides ds. This story was make when Ds and I was in school. So of course the grammar is bad. We hated English and math with a passion. We was just making a story for the fun of it. And no the story was discounted and adopted by someone else.
omo chapter 3 . 3/10/2014
Your grammar sucks and the sentences are really choppy. The story also escalated way too quickly. If i rated this story/ chapter right now from 1-10, 1 being the worst and 10 being the best, I would say it is a 2. Sorry, but you REALLY need to work on it.
bananamanaman chapter 1 . 12/15/2013
Can I beta this? OAO
Jojomcfizzle 456 chapter 3 . 6/26/2013
Its a good story, but lots of these words ar misspelled
Rose chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
You really need to read over your chapters and correct your grammar and spelling, because its so confusing.
Kumiko Cy23 chapter 15 . 8/16/2012
i would like to join you, i may not be a writer but as a reader most of the stories that i had read were gone. In fact most of my favorite stories. **
dizzydani666 chapter 2 . 8/5/2012
Advanced-ZeroX chapter 3 . 7/29/2012
you need to work on spelling
joice.xoxboubou.xox chapter 12 . 6/5/2012
Hey! Your story was good but, in most of the time when I was reading, I got distracted by so many grammar errors. Also, you ended the story at the wrong moment...I suggest that you end the story ,maybe,after Sasuke and Naruto returned to the Konoha Village or after an epic battle with Madara and etc... I hope this will help for your other fanfiction that you're working on )! Keep up the good work )!
tacaloking chapter 1 . 1/11/2012
i love this story but i much rather naruko and gaara but naruko ans sasuke is OK i always saw them as brothers that the only reason im not to found of this pairing
suzakulovescakes chapter 1 . 1/2/2012
a pleasant day to you

(but i think it wont be that pleasant for long)


first of all all...

your grammar sucks...


it already gave me headache when i read the first three paragraphs..but for the benefit of the doubt, i continued reading it until i finished the whole chapter...

and sadly...

it just sucked..

sorry if i had become quiet harsh on my words, i just don't like dilly-dallying..

there are also some spelling mistakes here and there..but i just thought that being a typo no harm done,..

but seriously..

i would've liked the summary and the thought of sasuke having to chase after naruto who is going to marry neji...but i just don't want to risk having more headache...

it would've been better if you had this beta'd and edited at some parts...

then that would've solved your difficulties here...


loved the plot

Lovestar and Silverice chapter 14 . 10/22/2011
no it was fine the way it was before...I have not even watched Naruto for so long so i forgot about them but i could remember it all again when i read it
Ninja99 chapter 14 . 9/11/2010
Hey! i would like to adopt this story :3 i dont really know ur email gunna say it here. But if i do, im gunna change a few things :P
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