Reviews for 0830 Hours
Choc chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
An excellent concept for a story and capably written. Enjoyable throughout.

To it's slight detrement...it hits a few spots of almost cringe-inducing mush...which isn't to say that mush is bad, but the extent of it...just don't go overboard.

If you're a fan of shooters at all, I would LOVE to see an Ikaruga story from you...
Tennion Pantharus chapter 1 . 8/25/2002
Wow... I love the game and that was by far the best thing I've ever read in my life. If you tried, you could write a book. Write more of these
Vick Pena chapter 1 . 2/16/2002
there is nothing better for a good battle game than a good intro story and let me tell you, ma'friend, this is an excellent one for an excellent game, kepp on writing
animemaster chapter 1 . 2/15/2002
WOW that was full of detail I loved it. keep writing you deserve more reviews if not better ones like this one. A
Toxic Shade chapter 1 . 2/5/2002
One word: Wow. I love stories that are drmatic
Deezee chapter 1 . 1/15/2002
Very nice. Very moving and original. Nice job!