Reviews for Bad PickUp Lines
Kaira-chan15 chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
Lolol these are very original and creative. Kudos to that facebook group! :D

I loved these:

"'I don't have an invisibility cloak but do you mind if I sneak into your Restricted Section?'

"Want to head to the Shrieking Shack? We could do some shrieking of our own."
pirate34 chapter 1 . 7/13/2010
you know before she met me moaning myrtle was just myrtle
naash chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
lol this was really really good. ive only ever read 4 harry potter fics but this is seriously funny and well written
ChinchillaCraze chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
I love this so much! I'm going to read the whole entire series you wrote just 'cause I miss it!
SarahiNia chapter 1 . 3/26/2010
Omg!
Obsessed With Chocolate chapter 1 . 1/8/2010
Haha a bit random but good
TheRoadgoeseverOnAndOn chapter 1 . 12/6/2009
A great story. Very funny.
Sailor Pandabear chapter 1 . 12/4/2009
lol. this was funny
watercircle chapter 1 . 10/8/2009
Very amusing! I certainly lol'd.

“You’re like a bottle of Skele-gro, making me grow a bone.” was the best, in my opinion.

You also weaved a good storyline around the whole thing too. Snape's reaction was great, though I don't think I could ever gather the guts to say anything like that to a professor. But that's why we write stories, isn't it?

Thanks for the great story. I'm still chuckling.
math music reading chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
That was hilarious! So bad! (Not your writing, the quality of your writing is wonderful)
Tomoshibi-Chan chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
wanna play with my socerers stones? xD omg. i died when i read this mini fic. xDD

historic. No, Epic. No, better.

lol i cant stop laughing! You made my day!

love this so much lol!
Lonely Traveler chapter 1 . 10/1/2009
X D. Hilarious. The Restricted Section joke was priceless! Nice job.