Reviews for Turning the Tides of War
Continuation chapter 6 . 4/23/2013
Please continue the story. It is really good! :)
PetiteLituanien chapter 6 . 1/22/2012
Update fast! Don't make promises if you won't able to do it :/. The story is very good, continue.
Chinkypinai chapter 6 . 12/29/2011
Amazing! Waiting for chapter 7!

Please update! I am so excited!

UPDATE! :)
The10Espada99 chapter 6 . 10/31/2011
Dang... reminded me of one of those dystopia books... i loved it!
MixA4 chapter 3 . 10/12/2011
Sad, but exciting at the same time! looking forward to the later chapters!
MixA4 chapter 1 . 10/12/2011
I like it so far!
eirea8 chapter 6 . 10/10/2011
UPDATE! update! UPDATE! NOWWWW. pleassssseee! i am begggging you.

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CallMeSweetie chapter 5 . 8/20/2011
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iridescent bookyworm chapter 5 . 8/20/2011
no words to describe how good this
Foxtrek 64 chapter 5 . 8/17/2011
hmmm... great chapter. The suspense from the present and the Alma are great, and how Odd is still his former self. The ONLY thing I would change is Garry. This is a personal preference, and I've only seen the name spelled this way: Gary. Like I said, personal preference - so this chapter gets an A (and over 9000 points over an A)
Foxtrek 64 chapter 4 . 8/17/2011
Great chapter, but whats up with the underline? It makes the whole story look like a hyperlink. Also - Project Alma - when I read it the first time, I read Project Lama (even though thats spelled wrong lol) Still, great chapter. Cant wait to see what happens next :D

See you on the dark side

Fox
Foxtrek 64 chapter 3 . 8/17/2011
Great job explaining why Dasha chose to go :) Only changes I could see done is when Ulrich questions the box, it says "its contents are for your and your team." Then after Dasha dies, Jeremy says "Maybe Xana gave up". It would make more sense, since you said that Xana doesn't give up, if he said "I wonder who won." or something to that extent. Finally, Instead of naming it "Chapter 3", make an actual name for it. For instance "Rescue", "Dasha", "Turning the Tide" etc.

Also - I believe I have a fitting quote for this story:

"War does not determine who is right, only who is left." - Bertrand Russell

Awesome story! I'll continue reading and I'll see you on the dark side. :)
Foxtrek 64 chapter 2 . 8/15/2011
Once again, another great chapter. I like how you're developing the story and the characters around the setting. It almost reminds me of fallout with the post-apocalyptic atmosphere. I'll continue to R&R, and I'll see you on the dark side.
Foxtrek 64 chapter 1 . 8/15/2011
Great chapter! I will list your name in the comments when I upload my next chapter, and as you have suggested, I have made it longer. When I get off of my iPad that is great at being useless, I will upload it. I like the way this first chapter is turning out, but could you add some filler in after ulrich gets off the phone and before he gets to the helicopter. Perhaps him rallying the volunteers and explaining more on the base (or whatever) they're in.

You've earned a watch on the story and a sub. I'll continue reading, and I'll see you on the dark side. :)
Anna chapter 5 . 5/28/2011
don't stop! keep writing!
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