|Reviews for Unbitten|
| crazy.weird.beautiful chapter 15 . 10/28/2010
Next chapter please. :D
| elizabeth14 chapter 15 . 8/10/2010
Love it! Please update soon!
| mkb3 chapter 15 . 5/31/2010
I am so in love with this story. Its a refreshing change from all of the other AU Vamp fics out there. Any chance of an update soon?...I'm kind of getting anxious for a new chapter...especially the one in Italy.
| Mo'Reading chapter 15 . 3/29/2010
Thank you for not making Bella & Jakes friendship end, so tired of that scenario. I noticed Carlile said that 200 years ago he saw the one vampire who was returned to a human state and he wasn’t happy. Did he mean he wasn’t happy as a vampire or did he mean he wasn’t happy as a human? I have to say the whole time Edward did something like carry the tote bag for Bella and she told him he could carry it himself and then said something like ‘Isn’t it easier for me?’ I kept thinking that if I were Bella I would constantly be saying well you know when ‘you human’ it won’t be easier anymore, you know to make sure I pointed out to him all the things we was in fact giving up and make sure he really wanted to do it. Are you going to make his transformation painful like it is when they become vampires? I read your other stories and you are doing great, thank your husband for what he does and Thank You for continuing to be there to give him strength as he defends our country.
| Mo'Reading chapter 8 . 3/27/2010
Thank you for making this story different from the books and for not making them spend time in the meadow. I really enjoyed the mountain view idea.
| babylopez2008 chapter 4 . 3/22/2010
Boo Charlie... that is soo messed up.
Lol off to sleep! Will read more later.
| babylopez2008 chapter 3 . 3/22/2010
Omg first Steve is stupid with what he thinks happens. Omg... lol I just wanted to slap him b/ it so did NOT make any sense.
Boo Billy and Charlie.
Gah they didn't even stay to help or find Bella?
| zucks4 chapter 15 . 3/22/2010
this is a great story! Lovingangels07 had your story for good reads on her blog. are you going to be posting a new chapter soon?
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/22/2010
Lol I wish I could eat that many pancakes. I can barely eat 2 b/c it tickles the top my mouth (I know weird, right?) and I can't handle it.
Ooh Emmett... I wonder if my idea of him is right or he just has "unique" eyes.
Okay 1 more chapter before I force myself to sleep. It's already 2am and I have to get up at 8:30.
| babylopez2008 chapter 1 . 3/21/2010
Hey it's me!
Lol first, I'm not gonna read the black balloon entry since my frail heart can't handle all that heart ache... lol i get wary with all those kinds of fics ;)
So I'm getting that you didn't have the preface at first?
Dang Charlie is soo messed up.
Ugh! I've been craving chinese for a while and I'm broke right now *pouts* darn you lol j/k
But yeah, I liking the story so far.
| KaTieitsMEE chapter 14 . 3/21/2010
Your lucky I love you girl!
Its against my religion to read T rated stuffs! Shamee lol
I was worried reading it since there's no smut! Lol
But its amazing and you write so damn good! LOVE!
I'm not worried anymore...this is becoming my fav story :)
Hahaha omg this story is ADORABLE!
I am in LOVE!
Its so fucking fantastic and so sweet
And gaahh loving it!
This is a bad ass story girl! Keep it up love :)
| 789123 chapter 15 . 3/5/2010
gah! heart clencher! every girl deserves their own edwardfckncullen. js. i can't wait to read more bb! see ur ass on twitter XO
| 789123 chapter 14 . 3/5/2010
damn this is unheard of in twilight history! a vamp changing into a human? how you came up with this, i have no idea. i worship at your creative feet *bows down and kisses feet* XO
| 789123 chapter 13 . 3/5/2010
I'm worried that E wont be able to protect B as well human. She is a clumsy chic! XO
| 789123 chapter 12 . 3/5/2010
O! I'm totes excited about the turn in the story! Must. Go. To. Next. Chapter. 33