Reviews for The Black Empire
ThatDesGuy chapter 1 . 7/18/2011
How is this story rated K? Lelouch plans to take the world...
Selonianth chapter 28 . 6/10/2011
moar please
tiduku chapter 28 . 5/22/2011
please update soon! i need to know what happens next!
Akuma-Heika chapter 28 . 5/22/2011
this is great! I can't wait for the next chapter. not much I can critique besides some small details but nothing serious. keep them coming.
Digman14 chapter 28 . 4/26/2011
I highly recommend you upgrade the rating to T, just to be safe. It still appears by standard in searches, and there's really no consequences. I'd hate to see a great story like this.
Nauran chapter 20 . 4/24/2011
Ahaha... Classic Sayoko... Oh, wait... no it's not.

Anyway, aside from the grammatical errors and missing words, everything about this is astounding. Characterization, description and plotlines above all!

Smiley face for you.

Popthepuff chapter 28 . 4/24/2011
ZOMG! Zombie Knightmares!

So...basically...Lelouch is going to help Nunally negotiate with Zero, and at the same time Negotiate with Nunally ...and...himself? o.O?

Whats with Shirley?

So anyways, the fic has been good thus far, and gets a 9.5/10 and the-0.5 is cause of some S&G mistakes, and I really look forward to seeing your next update and I hope that you have not abondoned this fic.

Popthepuff chapter 27 . 4/24/2011
Mostly a lolsy, light chapter, till towards the ending...
Popthepuff chapter 26 . 4/24/2011
Heh. XXXholic reference?
Popthepuff chapter 25 . 4/24/2011
GASPS! He asked for help from Britannia!:O

Popthepuff chapter 24 . 4/24/2011
Not much to say. :D Its great.
Popthepuff chapter 23 . 4/23/2011
This seems like a filler, at least its a little more entertaining than most tend to be. :
Popthepuff chapter 22 . 4/23/2011
Nicely ; noone seems to be suprised about Monicas postion in the organization; and the fact she is even in it.
Popthepuff chapter 21 . 4/23/2011
Is there any symbolism to that last bit?
Popthepuff chapter 20 . 4/23/2011
Generally more peaceful and humurous. I like it.
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