Reviews for The Black Empire |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Whoo, that was awesome! Can't wait to read more of it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Damn, this is starting to get impossible right here! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooh, that has got to be painful for Lelouch. Awesome story man. Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hoo, that was a close one. You really know how to spice things up, don't you? |
![]() ![]() ![]() How is this story rated K? Lelouch plans to take the world... |
![]() ![]() ![]() moar please |
![]() ![]() ![]() please update soon! i need to know what happens next! |
![]() ![]() ![]() this is great! I can't wait for the next chapter. not much I can critique besides some small details but nothing serious. keep them coming. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I highly recommend you upgrade the rating to T, just to be safe. It still appears by standard in searches, and there's really no consequences. I'd hate to see a great story like this. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ahaha... Classic Sayoko... Oh, wait... no it's not. Anyway, aside from the grammatical errors and missing words, everything about this is astounding. Characterization, description and plotlines above all! Smiley face for you. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ZOMG! Zombie Knightmares! So...basically...Lelouch is going to help Nunally negotiate with Zero, and at the same time Negotiate with Nunally ...and...himself? o.O? Whats with Shirley? So anyways, the fic has been good thus far, and gets a 9.5/10 and the-0.5 is cause of some S&G mistakes, and I really look forward to seeing your next update and I hope that you have not abondoned this fic. -PopthePuff- |
![]() ![]() ![]() Mostly a lolsy, light chapter, till towards the ending... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Heh. XXXholic reference? |
![]() ![]() ![]() GASPS! He asked for help from Britannia!:O lol. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not much to say. :D Its great. |