Reviews for Ash's Precious Little Girl
Xyoras chapter 3 . 12/21/2016
Okay, seriously, either her name is Hormura or her name is Shizuku.
You used Shizuku only in the second chapter, and now you keep on switching between them, so please explain what the Fuck is happening with this.
Guest chapter 19 . 12/20/2016
I hate this
Pokeevee57 chapter 11 . 9/27/2016
Haha, poor Brock. I laugh at his doom with girls and his jealousy of Ash! This is so cute! Loving it so far! )
Sexy Fox Girl chapter 1 . 8/27/2016
i was looking for this kind of fanfic for a long time and its complete with is even better
SceptileMan12 chapter 1 . 8/20/2016
I just started reading this today and i only have read 1 chapter and man is this funny lol
But 2 questions is the story finished with 39 pages/chapters or does it have a sequel or is it not finished
SourAgar chapter 39 . 6/13/2016
Just seen it had got 999 reveiws and couldn't stop from writing... It deservs 1k reveiws!(If not much much more)
Just one word
AWESOME!
ShadowFox119 chapter 39 . 6/4/2016
Ha ha. Love the marshmallow soup. Continue the sequel.
Guest chapter 15 . 6/3/2016
Sweet story but sudden ending if you askme
jordanlink7856 chapter 2 . 5/1/2016
This is pure fucking gold
PikaPikaPower chapter 4 . 4/23/2016
...'-'
Guest chapter 2 . 4/13/2016
this ... is ...AWESOME. I have read your fan fiction a million times
Amourshipper chapter 9 . 4/9/2016
HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!
AmourGalore chapter 5 . 4/9/2016
WHATTHAFRICK!?
Pokmaniac girl chapter 2 . 4/9/2016
DIS IS TOO FREAKING FUNNY!
Pokmaniac Girl chapter 1 . 4/9/2016
Hahahahahaha! A freaking giant marshmallow! And a break dancing Pikachu!
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