Azizica chapter 1 . 3/24/2012
It says that it was 2009 since you wrote this. Its really good and I want to know what happens to Momo next! Please write more.

Luv you:)

KayC-Explicit chapter 1 . 7/17/2010
I think this story was really good! I'm really into anime so this kind of got me interested. In the beginning, though, you mention the girl "Momo", in my opinion, a few more times then neccesary. Maybe use more she's or her's?

"Hello there. Looking for the history room?" asked a deep voice in front of her. She had knocked into him and dropped her books." I think it'd be a bit more interesting if you reworded it differently, maybe even opposite of what it is now, but that's your choice. :]
HayleyHavoc1 chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
SO good! :) write more please!
Pixieguitarbook46 chapter 1 . 4/10/2010
I like it!
CloudEnvy12 chapter 1 . 3/2/2010
hey i like this idea! it's so different but i love the story :D ... but try not to rush it though, it went a little fast, but just watch out for that and you will be set! :D can't wait for the next chapter! :D

oh and im a bit confused, on who some of the people are... are they OCs? and when's the ouran coming in the story, i noticed kyoya was in there though