Reviews for Tapas at Twilight: Honeymoon at Twilight
teamvampireswitches2412 chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
i love it, this was really good
71star chapter 1 . 10/5/2009

Was this a one shot?

Or is it a sequel?

I'd love more E&B...
BellaMadonna chapter 1 . 10/4/2009

From your partner in crime - I loved this little chapter. I thought the lemon was perfect for these two and the honeymoon was so good. I was so sad to see the story come to an end, but now, we can start on The Marksman! Hello Westward!

Hope4more chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Loved the honeymoon and all it brought. Way to seal up the story. Loved it, so very different each and every time. Can't wait to see what you come up with next. Where do you ge the time my friend? Simply amazing!
docsmilitarywife chapter 1 . 10/4/2009
Cute one shot, i enjoyed it. I wanna go to Hawaii & rub the famous Fertility Statue. We've been trying to have a baby for 5 years now.
BwithUforever chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
i thought it was wonderful...i can totally picture the whole thing!
christinemarie13 chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
I thought it was sweet that Edward made Bella realize how beautiful he thought she was when she didn't feel the same. And I loved the "my little momma." Cute.
jerseyhalliwell chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
sweetest ending to a chapter. ever :-)
love bite chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
That was just the perfect amount of detail without being smutty! I really liked it a lot.

I am actually taking hula lessons right now! My dream is to visit the PCC someday. I have never been to Hawaii, but my best friend is Hawaiin, so I am pretty fascinated with the culture.

I know they are older and all, but man, a honeymoon baby would be so hard. I guess they can handle it as they are perfect for each other and don't have to work through the crap some of us do our first year or two being married!
marigold123 chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
"I closed my eyes and rested my hands on his hips, desperately trying to bring my hammering heart under thumbs stroked gently up and down, brushing over the skin of my neck sending chills throughout my body." Love these thoughts you gave Bella. Wasn't Bella surprised when Edward said his experience level was about the same as hers? Too sweet!

“I’ve been waiting a long time for that, it was perfect Edward and it couldn’t have happened a moment later. I love you. And isn't it nice to know that we have the rest of our lives to practice?” I drew up and kissed him tenderly." Their lovemaking was sweet. They were so nervous and hadn't done this for quite awhile...yes I'm sure they will improve with practice! Love how you made this seem real.

The sweetest part? Charlie, the present they brought back from Hawaii!

I have so enjoyed this story and the outtakes. Thank you so much for writing!
TwiMom22580 chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
How romantic! A girl can dream of a night like that!
PLV chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
Both of the out takes were wonderful. Thanks for writing was nice to see everyone happy.

katmom chapter 1 . 10/2/2009



I'm SO glad you said SHAVE ice! There is no D in it! Excellent!

I lived in Hawaii and could see all the places they much fun!

Daddy again...lovely!

Thanks, so much, for sharing!

icefang7 chapter 1 . 10/2/2009 sweet and wonderful! thanks
Edlovesme chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
That was really sweet. Thanks for the insight on their honeymoon.
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