|Reviews for Tag to How Jennifer Keller Gained a Sister|
| NurseKelly chapter 5 . 9/3/2011
How Jennifer Keller Gained a Sister is on of my hands down favorites. This was a terrific companion piece. Thoroughly enjoyed it. I wish Atlantis was still on the air-I would have loved to see where they took McKeller...
| BetherdyBabe chapter 5 . 1/31/2010
That was: beautiful, astounding, breath-taking, amazing, marvelous, astonishing, remarkable, wonderful, incredible, magnificient, spectacular, awe-inspiring, fantastic, stunning - I'm running out of synonyms - extraordinary, mind-blowing, outstanding, unpredictable, detailed/descriptive, sweet, cute, thought-provoking, imaginative/original, - running out of adjectives - :)
I love the feelings paragraph were the ring, dress, and tuxedo make every touch even more loving and sweet. All of the detail of how they feel different than past times really helped to make some areas all the more sensuous.
He goes from placing the knife on the bedside table because he knows he'll need it to stopping Jennifer from cutting her own dress by pulling her back to him and then changing his mind and showing her just how skilled he can be when focused. :) You know you did something right if you have to stop her from cutting her own dress. :)
Thwarted by Rodney again, we'll have to see just how much she can make him lose control one of these days. :)
“I’ve always been told I can’t keep my mouth shut, so I’m going to put that to good use.” - easily one of my favorite lines. We all know exactly what he means, except for poor (haha, anything but), naive Jennifer. :)
“Rodney, you don’t have to ask permission to touch me. I’m your wife. When I agreed to marry you, I agreed to share everything including my body with you.” Another line I love to read. Such trust and openness. Plus, it's just overall really sweet.
“Oh, this is so romantic. Let me see the color of your underwear,” Jennifer said with mock annoyance. “Pull up your skirt honey.” Another top favorite. This chapter has so many great lines to choose from, it's hard to only pick one favorite. :) This is one of the best teasing lines I've read in a while.
I LOVE that he only went down the one leg with his worshipping kisses and strokes. Absolute genius saying he couldn't be too predictable. :)
He's using reverse psychology on her body. Making her NEED to cut the dress instead of grumbling that he as to untie the back. Very sly of him. And as soon as it is untied, she jumps off the bed and away from him. What a way to confuse him. :)
“Need to get rid of these anyways,” she said with a radiant smile and that look in her eyes again. I can see the devious glint in her eyes, he's gonna get it. :)
The Arthur conversation was great, the depth of his explanation and her tears was beautiful to read. He licked away her tears as he explained as well, so sweet of him.
“I’d do it again and again,” she said fiercely. Her love and devotion to her husband gave her a strength she seldom showed. “I love you and will never let you go." Yet another favorite line. I love how she says it so fiercely, I can only imagine the depth of her meaning.
The challenge at the end with Rodney saying he wouldn't mind losing was perfect. Offer to lose or not, I side with Jennifer. :)
Such a cute ending in both scenes, Gunny standing gaurd fits his nature in this story just right. :) And then tying it all back to Madison was a great way to finish.
And now to competely understate this, FANTASTIC job on all of Sisters! I'm so glad you were pursuaded to finish Sisters properly. :)
And with that, I officially claim your longest review. :) There was just so much to address. :)
| SpicyCat chapter 5 . 1/28/2010
That was...worth the wait!
| DanielWhite chapter 5 . 1/27/2010
| msdarque chapter 5 . 1/27/2010
Absolutely excellent chapter! ;)
Loved the guard too... LOL
| dwparsnip chapter 5 . 1/26/2010
I'm so sorry I haven't reviewed this yet...AWESOME finish. My man Rodney came through like a trooper. Nice descriptions and so on.
"The most infamous Marine of the Stargate program stood guard at the bottom of the staircase leading to their room. Any who passed by might wonder about the dress uniform and sword, but none would stop to question him. Master Gunnery Sergeant Richards was ensuring that little Madison Miller stood a good chance of getting her cousins sooner rather than later."
Gotta be one of the better lines I've read in a while.
| koinekid chapter 5 . 1/26/2010
Masterfully written as always, RF. Liked the appearance by Richards. I'd write a more detailed review, but there's no red font on FFN to illustrate the necessary blushing.
| ElisaD263 chapter 5 . 1/26/2010
O..M..G! That was just so..so..perfect! *thud*
I love that Rodney's boxers had GROOM printed on the front..that was brilliant! _
And Rodney wanting to do something he had never tried before so that he could please his new bride..so sweet (and hot!). Glad Jennifer didn't decapitate him, would have ruined the mood! _
Love how Jennifer went for the knife to cut the dress off. When you love a man so much that you want to cut off your dress to get closer to him...oh yeah!
Love, love how Gunny stood guard at the bottom of the staircase...great touch!
It's over! NO! _ Well done on this tag! Looking forward to see more from you! Just can't get enough of Rodney and Jennifer being intimate!
| msdarque chapter 4 . 12/13/2009
What a perfect and lovely and ..*sigh*.. incredible chapter! ;)
I most enjoyed reading it. LOL
Congrats! Lots of stars!
| dfdjkfd chapter 4 . 12/11/2009
I liked it but was dissipornted because I was hoping for it to be from Jennifer's point of view
| BetherdyBabe chapter 4 . 12/9/2009
The newest chapter is outstanding. I don't think it could be written anymore sensually.
I've reread it over ten times now and it just gets better every time. I must say that the ending is breath-taking.
All of the little kisses inbetween the talking were small sidenotes but very cute. I'm glad you put them in so smoothly. They really helped to connect the action and dialogue.
Love all of the funny lines, especially Jennifer's line about marriage. I break out with a huge grin every time I read it, probably because I know you're doing the wedding night as well. _ And we all know Rodney's going to be the smuggest 'stud' on Atlantis after this. :) The calculus line was hilarious, found it funny every time I passed it.
The way Jennifer and Rodney change views throughout the chapter. He goes from wanting to touch her, badly might I add :), to having to stop her from touching him multiple times.
The thought process from Rodney was so cute to watch progress as the scene went on. Jennifer's thoughts were always easy to understand by her actions.
The light banter in the middle was sweet, just a light teasing when needed. And the way they are instantly serious afterwards is a great writing technique. Also loved how flirty is was.
The ending bath scene was so sweet of him, he thought of everything in this story.
This story was my favorite from the beginning. I am forever grateful for your continuation with it. Not many authors finish such promising stories. Thank you for helping Dani finish such a beautiful story, even if it isn't quite done yet. :)
| ElisaD263 chapter 4 . 12/9/2009
YAY! Finally! _
Love how Jennifer and Rodney were continuously talking...teasing, reassuring, encouraging..I loved that!
And Jennifer crying and Rodney really for when it happened because Jeannie had warned him it might happen.
"When you proposed to me in front of our family today, I feel like we joined our hearts together. Now, I want to join our bodies as well,” - loved that! Well done!
The ending, perfect! Rodney carring her to a bubble bath! *sigh* That was a perfect ending! Looking forward to the next chapter!
| TooSweet chapter 4 . 12/9/2009
| DanielWhite chapter 4 . 12/9/2009
| kjhkjh chapter 3 . 11/22/2009