Reviews for Naruto: Rinnegan Chronicles
Glare chapter 3 . 8/13/2013
Im pretty sure pain - and yes it's pain, that's what it's supposed to mean and that's why he kept talking about pain because he named himself after it pein was just the way they would say in japanese - doesn't have the power to control gravity to that degree, and pretty sure it's just push pull. I guess I should say rinnegan doens't have that power.

On the plus note I do like the story so far. Mostly just small complaints that really don't matter.
Guest chapter 15 . 8/12/2013
I wonder if naruto will every learn planetary devastation
matthew.tanner.568 chapter 42 . 8/12/2013
Best one i'v read so far r u going to continue

P.S. please say yes
Guest chapter 42 . 7/21/2013
read a few of ur stories n have to say they r great. really like the fact tht i see a story to the end...unlike sum people. so keep up the good an thank u
Mohammad.Alzo chapter 5 . 7/20/2013
Mohammad.Alzo chapter 4 . 7/20/2013
Cute indeed, so does he have perfect chakra control now or not?!
Mohammad.Alzo chapter 3 . 7/20/2013
Mohammad.Alzo chapter 1 . 7/20/2013
I hope it is clear to you that the Rinnegan gives almost perfect chakra control am I correct?
Anon chapter 4 . 7/12/2013
Try to work on your character developement better, seriously, Yugito isn't going to instantly have a crush on someone from another village just from watching them fight, especially not a shrimp like Naruto. When Naruto first saw her sleeping I just didn't find it realistic, I didn't believe in your story, so I shall read no further.
Guest chapter 36 . 7/11/2013
How could you kill yugito I swear I will take your soul
KillerPheonix chapter 12 . 7/1/2013
Let me guess that 2 out of 6 stuff is talking about 4 other crystals like the hex crystal and tsunade's necklace. Anyways the story is amazing so far and I can't wait till I wake up tomorrow to read the next chapters. So far this is one of THE best stories I've read
Guest chapter 37 . 6/26/2013
You jackass
LelouchXKallen chapter 8 . 6/23/2013
Why the hell is he wearing a jumpsuit again?
Clandon chapter 3 . 6/18/2013
Poor, not pour. Ridiculous, not ridicules.
Sanna chapter 10 . 5/30/2013
Greta Story! :D continue (y)
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