Reviews for Naruto: Rinnegan Chronicles
Fuck you chapter 36 . 8/1/2017
idk chapter 17 . 7/24/2017
Fuck this story man...I thought only naruto gets the Rinnegan...not a whole fucking clan
Jared51 chapter 38 . 7/6/2017
You need to shoot yourself
Jared51 chapter 29 . 7/6/2017
Naruto should have handle itachI easily you stupid piece of shit
Xethesis chapter 3 . 6/28/2017
I kinda would've thought that orochimaru would instead set his sight on naruto, but i guess the rinnegan cant copy like the sharingan, so fair enough.
Guest chapter 1 . 6/22/2017
It is prodigy not progeny, appart from that is interesting
Guest chapter 14 . 6/2/2017
Nope nope nope
Ani chapter 3 . 4/26/2017
the raikage shouln't be present. hidden leaf village and hidden cloud village are not on good terms as they fought on opposite sides during the third shinobi war. in the anime and manga too, they were not absent during the chuunin exam arc
If u dunt liek me go KYS chapter 42 . 4/23/2017
JKArcanus chapter 2 . 4/15/2017
Jiraiya really is a crap teacher, but the fic starts too late to fix that on the whole...oh well, at least he's better than Kakashi and in this version he at least got three days of actually useful training after wasting most of the month instead of pretty much wasting the entirety of the month in canon. A lots is glossed over that'll hopefully be covered later, but it's understandable why he asks to keep the eyes hidden.

In the fight with Neji last chapter, letting himself get hit, and continue to be hit, by a stationary, lengthy, finishing moving was beyond foolish, even if he "planned" it and it served only to really cheapen pretty much all the good will this version of the fight garnered vs the original canon.

Also, Kakashi speaking all pridefully and knowingly to the other genin and jonin about him and his complex layers and capabilities is beyond annoying considering he's not responsible for any of it, nor does he actually know the boy beyond face value aside from being aware of his parentage...despite the couple of months leading their team. That and Naruto's overly awkward mid fight struggle to remember why he fights considering wave happened just shy of a month ago made a lot of this chapter somewhat painful to read.

The useless summoning at this point also really detracted quite lot from what seems to be an attempt at a (very) slightly more competent a Naruto using the same skills he ad in canon to this point due to keeping the eyes hidden. At least in canon he was indignant over it since it was obviously not his intention. In this it didn't phase him which makes it seem like getting a completely useless summon was actually his intention, which is just farcical. He says he wanted a lower toad, yes...but one would think that's one the size of him that could have helped contribute to the fight instead of being the size of a building ...not one to sit on his head and just get in the way. Sure it may come into play later with Bunta like in canon, but he certainly couldn't/shouldn't have been actually planning that. Not only is that silly in the's simply author meta at that point (one of Kishi's worst flaws...don't perpetuate it).

Still intrigued and hopeful for the remainder...on to chapter three!
Scipio Marcellus chapter 42 . 4/11/2017
this is a masterpiece
Scipio Marcellus chapter 36 . 4/11/2017
thats just killed Yugito you sick man
Guest chapter 28 . 3/24/2017
let kakashi be reborn
AduriteOV2 chapter 1 . 3/23/2017
Once the Finnegan is activated,It cannot be deactivated. As said by the Sage of Six Paths, but its your fanfiction, so you can make up what ever you want. Good work. Keep it going!
bullshit chapter 1 . 1/28/2017
I just can't get over the fact that naruto can deactivate his reningan.
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