Reviews for Naruto: Rinnegan Chronicles
naruto323232323 chapter 1 . 10/9/2015
Guest chapter 32 . 10/4/2015
I've got to chapter 23 and I can honestly say you are the best yet worst artist yet you have to many holes on your plot meaning things such as the necklace telling Naruto things of the Rinnegan though he hasn't learn to use it yet and there is too many main character deaths and you've made that you killed almost every jonin just to make Naruto hokage and you have made it so you can't fix this mistake by having Pein nor Naruto bring them back because of the time period and the fact that they can't survive it without bringing back everyone so literally since all of this I no longer have in interest to continue reading p.s. Your chapter are to short combine them 2 should be 1
HikariTheGreat chapter 1 . 10/5/2015
love it tbh
HikariTheGreat chapter 3 . 10/5/2015
love it tbh
Ettore chapter 19 . 10/1/2015
Mukade... centipede. Interesting name. Was it an ANBU name?
Guest chapter 32 . 9/28/2015
Lol wave country isnt even in the same direction as iron country from rice country
Guest chapter 13 . 9/17/2015
Type your review here . bad fight scenes bad write up giving naruto all that power but making him almost useless and dependant on the Fox power. Why give him the rinnegan's godlike powers wen u can't even write him using it well. Am out of here
Guest chapter 42 . 8/6/2015
your stories man... they give me tingle's at the end...()︵
i cant stop reading lol 3 keep up the good work
DarkUmbreon15 chapter 38 . 7/28/2015
I thought that Kurama's yin was sealed in Minato.
Hikari chapter 7 . 7/2/2015
How is it all gone if you just left it in your coat?
26Naruto26 chapter 2 . 5/7/2015
I love this story, but this chapter here has some of the dumbest lines from all your fanfictions
Nightwolfs chapter 42 . 4/28/2015
gj i congratulate you good sir on a story well done
Guest chapter 6 . 4/10/2015
Translation section has no translations... Good plot and story though
Demonshark96 chapter 5 . 3/18/2015
I know you're probably not going to read this review but I just want to say that I really like the story so far, my one complaint though is that it took Naruto and company two weeks to travel 10 kilometers. I could sneeze and walk 10 kilometers so I imagine 3 well trained shinobi could get a bit farther than that in two weeks. Other than that little tid bit I love the story so far
Aegorm chapter 14 . 3/18/2015
Kinda annoying how you allow The Rinnegan to pop up everywhere...

Do you really think orichimaru would want the sharingan when he can have the eyes of the bloody sage of the six paths? He can litterally chose to take over tayuya at any moment...

So many fucking plotholes, learn to write...
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