|Reviews for Naruto: Rinnegan Chronicles|
| K chapter 28 . 2/16/2015
Wow, you really did Gai a disservice in this chapter. I'm not gonna highlight all the other flaws in this, but I would like to say that 7 Gates Gai is easily equal to Kisame and 8 Gates Gai would fucking destroy him.
| marquis.shax chapter 31 . 2/17/2015
uhm one question as I'm seriously confused by something here. If Naruto was using the Chibaku Tensei on Danzo then Danzo would be sucked up into the "moon" that's in the air so wouldn't a Shinra Tensei blast that ball of rock further up instead of destroying it?
| marquis.shax chapter 28 . 2/17/2015
you forgot to mention Killer B and probably the Raikage A could solo Kisame maybe even Mei and Tsunade, I doubt old 'Noki could though as while he can fly an all that he's just a bit to slow an his hip/back issue would slow him down more
| marquis.shax chapter 27 . 2/17/2015
technically Pein didn't defeat anyone single handedly as he used his paths and had to repair them quite a few times if not for the paths and that ability to repair he'd have lost
| marquis.shax chapter 25 . 2/17/2015
damn can't believe you killed off Tenzo. I'm wondering IF you had Naruto stopped by Kabuto like that would you have had him drain his chakra?
| marquis.shax chapter 21 . 2/17/2015
I honestly think that Deidara was probably the weakest of the akatsuki (aside from Obidara when pretending to be Tobi) if it weren't for his ability to create clay birds and fly he'd have gotten his ass kicked by anyone
| marquis.shax chapter 16 . 2/17/2015
I think you should've devoted a chapter or two to his training with Jiraiya instead of just skipping over it (even though that's what happened in canon lol)
| marquis.shax chapter 14 . 2/17/2015
oh great so you've made Tayuya an Uzumaki let me guess Mei will also be an Uzumaki as authors seem to like making every single redhead in the narutoverse an Uzumaki
| marquis.shax chapter 11 . 2/17/2015
since in canon it never went into the development of the skills of the rinnegan when first activated I'm hoping you stuck with what most fanfic authors have been doing and have each path or skill or w/e you wanna call it with the rinnegan take time to develop and not just automatically be there kinda like the Sharingan how it has to develop from 1 to 3 tomoe
| marquis.shax chapter 10 . 2/17/2015
lmao you've already diverged from canon quite a bit with the whole Kyuubi attack, Kushina still living in Whirlpool and only coming to Konoha to give birth to Naruto, and adding Yugito to team seven lol. Also I'm quite curious why exactly do you seem to like Naruto being with Yugito so much I noticed your Naruto stories all seem to be Naru/Yugi. I have no problem with the pairing although I do prefer Hinata but will take Yugito and pretty much EVERYONE else over Sakura lol
| marquis.shax chapter 8 . 2/17/2015
lol well you were only off by one when it comes to Kakashi being Hokage turns out he became Rokudaime after Tsunade retired (probably just so she can drink all the time again lol) and then Naruto became w/e the word for seventh is
| marquis.shax chapter 6 . 2/17/2015
man I really don't understand why the fuck people butcher the story of the Kyuubi so badly by saying it appeared first in whirlpool an just randomly showed up in Konoha. Why the fuck can't people just stick to canon and say that Kushina was the previous jinchuuriki
| wisetristan chapter 42 . 1/23/2015
naruto and yugito didnt die casue if they did the ten tail would be released or naruto sealed it in the six crystals but those are only theories to be honest i think you should make a sequal with naruto's and yugito's son minato as the main character and tell about what happened
| Moonlessnightofsweden chapter 42 . 12/28/2014
I have read a lot of fanfictions but i got to give you credit it was perfect...the end was wonderful i loved all of it...ps. susanooo means storm god in Japanese i think... northern sweden that means songs of the mountain...
| Kyuubi Soul chapter 42 . 12/21/2014
Alright then... what's your name?
Me: U W0T N0W M8?