Reviews for I'll try
BE1313 chapter 7 . 11/3/2009
That was really good. Is there gonna be a sequel? It seems kinda open ended like you might do one or maybe you're leaving it open for our imaginations? But either way, very good!
DesmondsConstant chapter 7 . 11/2/2009
Aww. That was a really cute story. :-) I'm sad that I didn't find it until it was over, but hopefully you'll be writing something new soon!
AllyCameron chapter 7 . 11/2/2009
Aw, lovely ending!
AllyCameron chapter 6 . 10/23/2009
Great chapter!
girl-scout47 chapter 5 . 10/16/2009
Great chapter! Wonder what's gonna happen in the bar :-D
Limaccia chapter 4 . 10/11/2009
Good luck with the job! BTW:

“diagnose” is the verb – “The team continued to try to diagnose the patient”

“diagnosis” is the noun – “The team finally came up with the right diagnosis”

“diagnoses” is plural of the noun – “The team suggested several wrong diagnoses before they finally came up with the right diagnosis”


At the end, you want to say either: “This could mean only one thing”

OR “That meant only one thing”
AllyCameron chapter 4 . 10/10/2009
Better a little chapter than no chapter :-) Good luck for you job interview!
all-maps-welcome chapter 3 . 10/5/2009
I like how he was leaving little gestures for her that the 'old' cameron liked - getting her to remember times where she loved him.

One point though, if you uses quotations marks or speech marks before and after someone speaks, its easier to tell the speech apart from the other prose.

Just a tip. Other than that, good stuff.

Limaccia chapter 2 . 10/3/2009
I like the story, although I certainly would like to believe Cameron is special, as opposed to House only wants what he can't have.

Favorite line:

"Have you taken something?"

"Well, you know me – little this and little that, nothing unusual."
Sophies-Welt chapter 2 . 10/3/2009
Awesome chapter!
Sophies-Welt chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
Nice, more please!
AllyCameron chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
I liked the start, looking forward to more!
Limaccia chapter 1 . 10/2/2009
Good start.