Reviews for All Becomes All Right
VSPS chapter 1 . 9/14/2010
This fic caught my eye from the characters, not ones normally written about. Wow, great telling from Sue's POV. Just Wow.
chst chapter 1 . 8/15/2010
Like, like like it.
CallmeStar chapter 1 . 8/3/2010
wow, this was a delightfully insigtful story and i don't believ that i have read anythign else that explains how Sue and Charlie get together as well as this did.

thank you for the awesome read.
Sandra Marques chapter 1 . 5/26/2010
Very beautiful your story. I loved to see more deeply the relationship between Sue and Charlie. Thanks for that. Ps: Sorry if I had any mistake in this review. Im Brasilian and english is kind a difficult to me. But I hope you would understand me. Kisses, Sandra
booty492 chapter 1 . 5/6/2010
I loved reading Sue's POV! This was very well written. I'm a huge fan of Charlie's porn 'stache. LOL!
Spenderella chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
Ok so I absolutely love this way more than I expected to. Did you purposefully put Sue in Bella's shoes? You didn't make a direct reference to it, so I wasn't sure, but the part about:

What could I say except that it was Charlie I wanted? That it was his arms I craved when I needed to lean on someone. It was his voice I wanted whispering in my ear at night. It was him that I wanted to make smile for as long as I was able to.

That's a lot like how Bella described choosing between Edward and Jake... it was just Edward she wanted.

Anyway great one shot!
KristALchelle chapter 1 . 3/17/2010
Hi Hon, OMG! This is EXACTLY what I was looking for tonight and I did not think that I would find it! We are spotlighting Sue this week and needed good fics to rec that feature her. This story is absolutely perfect. I love how you have portrayed all of the characters. Awesome job bb! The segment will run tomorrow at w dot lesfemmesdetwilight dot blogspot dot com. ~Krista
myoung228 chapter 1 . 1/1/2010
Great story. You were able to get a lot of really good material into a short story/one shot; the relationship with Billy, the wedding, Nessie, the wolves. I really like how it closely follows Breaking Dawn. It's great that Sue and Charlie not only comfort and help each other heal, but truely love and fulfill each other's lives. I like that Charlie being such a strong confident police chief is able to share his vulnerablity with Sue. And I really like the Nessie calls Sue grandma. I've never read anything like that in any of the other fanfiction stories. Very thoughtful, especially since Leah may not be able to have childen. It would have been nice if Charlie and Sue got married.
Twi-Smile chapter 1 . 10/16/2009
A pleasant quick read
Reggie Jolie chapter 1 . 10/13/2009
I loved your story.

You managed to capture the tension between Sue, Billy and Charlie. And it was wonderful.


ps: I don't speak and writing English well. sorry
ckcpurple chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
I agree, that was a very interesting experience. Nice job. I enjoyed your take. I little hard to read at times since I’m with the vampires and she is clearly pro-wolf in the beginning but it was very well-written and thought out. Good luck.
susayq chapter 1 . 10/11/2009
I really liked this. Nice job :)

bmango chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
That was quite interesting - to see Sue change from hating the Cullens and wanting to protect Bella, to hating Bella, to accepting the situation and Nessie as her granddaughter. Very cool... Good luck in the contest! -b
rameau chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Well done. Beautiful snapshots from the outside, or from fringes, looking in but still painting a picture of a different kind of world. I like reading about the wolf pack and the people connected to them but I also know that I could never write for them, not nearly as well as you have.
thenlaugh chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
neither Charlie or Billy are DILF's to me, but this was the best one-shot I've read in a while. I love Charlie and Leah, so the Sue POV was great, and there's some really great insight here too. I particularly love all the little jokes at Seth being in love with Edward lol.
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