Reviews for Clarity
speadee chapter 1 . 10/5/2009
Good job on the surprise of it being a dream! When things didn't seem to make sense, I began to suspect that it was a dream. I've read many stories where things didn't make sense only to find out at the end that it was a dream. I tend to describe dreams like that, too. You kept the suspense well.

I also like how you brought Oishi in with descriptiojns from Kikumaru's POV. What was Kikumaru's important decision, and what was he going to do?

I'm glad you explained things, because I had some trouble figuring things out. It's true that our troubles enter our dreams, and you showed that well.