Reviews for Unforgiving
Margoliskid chapter 1 . 8/24
really well done! and I always love reading stories lol and i love the thought of Naruto hating his father for sealing the fox into him! well done
Guest chapter 3 . 6/8
I love the story great job but spelling and grammar mistakes are making it a chore to read please improve.
CosmicBeing chapter 7 . 5/18
Still haven't pissed off and died yet eh Kishimoto lover? Tch you will soon enough.
MythicGR66 chapter 21 . 3/28
oh please update this story.
Guest chapter 21 . 2/4
Arashi2144 chapter 21 . 12/19/2014
Good Story update soon
Guest chapter 21 . 11/20/2014
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Lord Asmodeus chapter 9 . 8/8/2014
...Started good but was strangely boring.

This wasn't dark or evil...

Merely angst with teenagers.
Guest chapter 21 . 5/11/2014
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Lu Bane Na chapter 12 . 5/12/2014
I looked at that poll. There were dozens of potential candidates missing from that poll that put Hinata Hyuuga to shame.
JG483 chapter 21 . 10/31/2013
I love how you are making Naruto's harem grow in number and maturity. I also love how you made Naruto into a powerful character yet you also made it clear that he needed to grow. I have to admit I'm hooked and I cant wait for you to update again.
YuukiAsuna-Chan chapter 1 . 9/26/2013
just killed it for me, its so annoying when they have kids half way through a story... it should just show the kids in epilogue
kit no kaze chapter 21 . 8/21/2013
interesting.. but i am curious of ur end game.. is naruto trying to take over kohana or the world... and if the world he needs to branch out more fast... connections take years like gara will take years to make kage ext.. but otherwise i am loveing the story.. and do hope for more lemons.. i am curious if hannabi is going to join... and if haku and tayuya will aswell what about isibary .
HeadChoppingCleaver chapter 1 . 4/24/2013
Am I the only one who thinks of Hinata,and gets 'creeper'?
darkreaper2009 chapter 21 . 4/17/2013
Man that's some brains u got for this story ... never read such an incredible plot
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