|Reviews for The tale of the three trees|
| ButterflyMouse chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
A very interesting beginning, I think the readability could be improved if you broke the paragraphs up a little more. Generally authors on this site will leave a space between every paragraph, even the ones which only include a line of speech. It breaks up the page and makes things easier to read.
But yes, I enjoyed what you wrote. Am very interested to see what you come up with next and how you end up relating it all into the Legendsong.