Reviews for Origins: The Life of Zaknafein Do'Urden
Guest chapter 3 . 12/29/2012
Completely unrealistic. Here's how it probably would have gone down:

"There's are foods on my eyes, Mommy."
"Oh, yes?" Alakdra purred. "Here, let me fix that for you."
With that, Alakdra lunged forward and began gouging Illiam's eyes out with a napkin.

I'll stop there before it gets too gory.

I can see why you stuck to a happy rainbow dinner. I must say, though, when I read the intro to this chapter I was expecting it to be like, some of the food was poisoned, if you didn't eat you got whipped with those three-headed viper whips, etc., etc.

I have to say, I'm relieved and diappointed at the same time.
Rat-Man chapter 5 . 3/16/2010
Good story! Though, you really must finish it. What happens to Zak? Oh, you should definately write more stories about Zak.
Lady Ellemiire Do' Urden chapter 5 . 2/8/2010
Wow.. this is so intense.. really draws you in. I am loving it so far and look foward to the next chapter. *pokes and lurks about, waiting*
PriestessHelene chapter 4 . 1/20/2010
It has been a long time I read a story of the drow but you did a very good job so far. I am curious to see how this story ends.
muyany chapter 1 . 11/5/2009
Oh, interessting...

I want to see more of this.