Reviews for Dominance
by-Masha-with-love chapter 4 . 9/25/2015
Goood job!
The Insanity Of A Fluffy Bunny chapter 4 . 5/28/2013
Oooooh, that was absolutely amazing! LOVED it!
Unsightlyviewings chapter 4 . 7/16/2011
Bleeping awesome!
0jadecat0 chapter 4 . 1/24/2011
Wow. I loved this. I loved it! It was so beautiful! So beautiful! I loved it. And I don't care it was written in 2009, I'm still reviewing it. Can't say much more than
Love332 chapter 4 . 12/7/2010
Hot chapter! The lemon was really hot!
Insomniac-Spectrum chapter 4 . 11/2/2010
Teehee! :)

Loved it.


Hesunohana chapter 4 . 11/1/2010
I love the two of them together. well-written. bravo !
OurSilentLullaby chapter 4 . 9/2/2010
ooooh! that was sooo cuuute!

I love your stories! x3 keep up the awesome work!
LaLaNyaNya chapter 4 . 8/4/2010
o mi freakin god! this was THEE best fanfic ever! i love love love it! i was laughing and turned on at the same time! keep up the awesome work! ozbert forever...always!
Free of Mundane Thoughts chapter 4 . 7/24/2010
That was really impressive for a first... You SURE you haven't written lemons before? Because that was better than the majority of what you can find on ffn... Even if it was embarrassing to write... you should still write more... because I'd totally read it... and really really want to read it...

...that was really... really... hott...

And I nearly forgot it was a fanfic, it seemed more like a doujin to me. Pictures and everything. Did you know how good you are with descriptions? o.O;;; Because that's real talent, right there. Jeez... I mostly search for 'M' rated things on ffn, hoping for the rare moments that I find things like this...

What's especially impressive is that this isn't PWP; it actually has plot and character development and EVERYTHING... and it was so in character and it was really crazy... o.O...
li ross chapter 4 . 7/19/2010
Oh my, this is my first review in ages (Actually it's only been a few days of laziness, yet it seem like a lot).

About the fic, there's not much I can say: I must admire you capacity of creating long lasting plot without rushing o makin people feel tired of it, and I do, certainly. There are, I won't deny, a few spelling/grammar mistakes, and I think once or twice you jumped from the general past tense of the story to present. Nothing any human cpuld not commit, specially at a long text.

For a first lemmon, that was great, congrats!

So, I'm gonna end this here, thanks for the story, keep on writing, please n.n

MOON PORE chapter 4 . 6/28/2010
Awesome o/o And then Alice walks in xD
Me voy chapter 3 . 6/22/2010
So beautiful!
Me voy chapter 2 . 6/22/2010
Awwww. It was so tender; very cute.
Me voy chapter 1 . 6/22/2010
Oh how much I love the angst in this. You are a very good writer, expressing bittersweet feelings; I love it.
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