|Reviews for Two Halves of One Whole|
| RMBlythe chapter 1 . 1/21/2014
Oh my gosh. I can't even… Wow! That was sooo good! You wrote Laurie so remarkably on point! Loved every word!
| SweettFace chapter 1 . 10/30/2013
| cathynyc chapter 1 . 8/29/2012
Great sorry. Listening to lauries thoughts. Please continue the story. Having Jo chase him. Making her work this time for forgiveness. And romance with laurie
| Celebrytie Aris Channas chapter 1 . 1/22/2010
I loved this. It was absolutely amazing. Not only was it very realistic, it was very in-character. I watched this movie last night and it's been a while and it just made me want to cry when she refuses him. It drives me nuts how stupid she is...but, thank you, for making it real for me.
| great gospel chapter 1 . 1/6/2010
Beautiful, yet so horribly depressing. Wonderful perception on Laurie's character.
/One day she would love someone, just as I condemned her to, yet she will never love him completely. She and I are two halves of the same whole, our hearts and souls are entwined and nothing can break that bond; though today I saw it weaken./
I absolutely loved that part. It truly speaks volumes about the two of them. Thanks for this piece.
| 221b-whovian chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Sad... and so true. Jo and Laurie ARE two halves of the same whole, now if only those halves would get married...
| Beth Rose Harker chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
Good job! You have some nice insights into Laurie's character here.
| Mariagoner chapter 1 . 10/3/2009
Oh, this was so wonderfully written and so touchingly sad. I love how well you delve into Laurie's heart-broken, bitter mind, simultaneously showing his pain/rage while also showing his awareness of how fruitless and unworthy it is. My heart truly breaks for him in this piece. Poor Laurie!