Reviews for Occasional Emma Drabbles
theredrobin chapter 6 . 4/12/2011
You entirely won me over from the moment Knightley said "are you self-aggrandizing again?"

I really like these sweet and short snippets. Chapter 4 was especially adorable, with little Emma trying to get a rise out of Knightley and failing utterly.

Never fear, you are totally allowed to be inspired by film versions, especially that one. It's my favorite adaptation of 'Emma.'
ChocolateIsMyDrug chapter 6 . 3/14/2010
Proper drabble length is 100 words? Oops (*suddenly realises that own drabbles are starting to push 500 words in length*).

This was another great one, a perfect counterpart to Mr Knightley's jealousy. I love the way she at first is adamant that she only wants him to stay single so that her nephew inherits Donwell, but then by the end of the drabble she's sort of questioning herself.

As for the line from the KB/MS version, 'I'm sure I don't know' - I vaguely remember Mr Knightley telling Emma she doesn't play as well as Jane because she doesn't practice - is that it? (I remember thinking the way he said it was pretty tactless - Emma practically wilted)

I love reading these drabbles, so I hope you're not going to be updating sporadically! (Ha, I used 'sporadically' in a sentence today)
ChocolateIsMyDrug chapter 5 . 3/14/2010
Lovely - I like how rationally, Mr Knightley can see that Frank is doing worse by Jane, but he is more upset by what Frank is doing to Emma.

A nice look into Mr Knightley's head - I especially love the last line!
ChocolateIsMyDrug chapter 4 . 2/27/2010
Ooh, this was cute! This is a great moment to explore, and I love how you did it. The last line was heartwarming and made me smile. Thanks for this - hoping for more next week!
dontstealmyvitaminies chapter 4 . 2/26/2010
This one was really cute!
ChocolateIsMyDrug chapter 3 . 2/13/2010
LOL! This little ficlet is priceless - now we need one about Mr. Knightley's changing hair, when the angry outbursts mainly coincide with the horrid wig! Keep the drabbles coming!
ChocolateIsMyDrug chapter 1 . 2/12/2010
I love this drabble too - so cute and funny! But come on - what happened to the 'weekly' drabbles? Please write some more - I love your style!
dontstealmyvitaminies chapter 2 . 12/7/2009
Cute, but short! I want pages and pages and PAGES of words! Ah! I like your style, but there's just not enough of it! You have to continue this!

Please? (sad face)

ChocolateIsMyDrug chapter 2 . 11/1/2009
Very cute - I love how you integrated lots of the 'fingers' moments into one drabble. Now I must go and rewatch parts of episode 4 with this fanfic in mind (how tedious, LOL...)!
OneDarkandStormyNight chapter 1 . 10/19/2009
Very cute...I've never read the book, but a phenomenon about the model of the book cover and me has been brought to my attention, and so I thought I'd look into the fandom. (See my profile if you want to know what that phenomenon is - it's pretty crazy.)

Anyway, this is an adorable little snapshot and I hope for more updates soon! (Please?)
Anenihan chapter 1 . 10/15/2009
Hm, it appearsyou're behind a week on your weekly drable.. and soon it well be two weeks! For shame for shame... have you lost your muse already?

so is this after the book (when they're married) or during the book? I'm sure I could answer that myself if i hd a few more drabbles... hint hint meow