|Reviews for Love For A Child|
| darkorangecat chapter 11 . 2/12/2010
I love the marriage proposal - spoken quietly, in the dark and leaving Spinelli speechless. Sadie is finally theirs. Lovely chapter.
| suerum chapter 11 . 2/11/2010
This chapter was truly perfect. It was very domestic in the beginning with a sick Sadie and Jason's totally appropriate proposal-timing, place, casualness, it was all ideal. This line was priceless and entirely apropos:settling instead for gawking up at Jason as if he’d just suggested that there was no difference between Mac and PC operating systems. It is doubly hilarious because Jason isn't capable of suggesting any such thing!
I liked the morning routine and the DaJa nickname, very creative. Then the tension of the scene in the judge's chamber where it looked like it was all going to slip out of their fingers and Raynor of all people is their white knight! I didn't see that coming, way to introduce a modern deux ex machina!
Thanks for taking me on this journey with JaSaSpin, LOL!
| darkorangecat chapter 10 . 1/29/2010
It's great that Diana is willing to sign the papers, to truly give Sadie to Spinelli and Jason. Some of the mounting tension seems to have been relieved in this chapter, will it remain that way?
| darkorangecat chapter 6 . 1/29/2010
Wow, that was so beautifully written. Your descriptions are so vivid and, to be honest, I could almost feel the massage as well. Simply amazing writing!
| darkorangecat chapter 7 . 1/29/2010
This was a very intense chapter. It started off with a wonderful moment with Sadie saying her first word and then turned into a nightmare when she was kidnapped. The moments between Jason and Spinelli were wonderfully written. Spinelli's spent emotional state was especially heartrending and Jason's patient ministrations to help him through it were touching. Great chapter!
| suerum chapter 10 . 1/10/2010
Well this chapter was short but oh, how sweet! Everything is coming together. The boys are cleared of complicity in Sonny's murder and now Diana is going to allow them to adopt Sadie! Happy Days! I liked the territorial stand off between Raynor and Jason.
| suerum chapter 9 . 1/3/2010
Two things happened in this newest update. The first is that I believe Jason and Spinelli managed to convince Raynor about their story. It will take the fingerprints to make it a case closed scenario but that of course is what it is. The other thing is that they have also convinced Diane, albeit they don't know it yet, that they are the right parents for Sadie. Her observation of them showed true love and caring. I think she's going to be smart enough to recognize that her daughter is better off with them on a permanent basis. She can be in her life also, as much or as little as she wishes. I think things are going to end well soon...
| suerum chapter 8 . 12/27/2009
As my mother always said, 'the plot thickens'! A nice web of interconnectedness between Sonny, Casey and the kidnapping and Sonny's demise. Raynor is still in the picture and still manipulating people. Right now, for me, the biggest cypher is Diana. She's the wild card in this custody situation. She seems somewhat passive aggressive and I am waiting to see what she chooses to do with regard to accepting Jason and Spinelli as Sadie's guardians or trying to raise her herself. I know what the correct choice is.
| suerum chapter 7 . 12/21/2009
This was a packed chapter. You did an excellent lead in with the original phone-call, which is the one the reader thinks, just like Jaspin, that something bad has occurred but we're all wrong. It's just Maxie sharing an important milestone that later will be pivotal to the plot.
There were so many aspects to this chapter I appreciated. Spinelli's reactions- from the moment he hears about the kidnapping to when they find Sadie and then his near breakdown due to the guilt- were all well drawn. Poor Jason, he had to contend with not just worrying about Sadie but Spinelli as well. Casey, she's a piece of work and Diana is coming across as weak, a pawn in the fight over her daughter's custody. Mac was great, bringing that moose was wonderful. It is why I like him, fundamentally he's a very decent man. So, a very excellent entry in the series.
| suerum chapter 6 . 12/17/2009
Thanks very much for this chapter, I hope there might be future encounters as well. It was both sexy and sensual and so very, very kind of Maxie! Jaspin are hot!
| suerum chapter 5 . 12/1/2009
So this was a very intense chapter. Spinelli's mother explains a lot about how he turned out the way he did, never good enough obviously. Jason was good, I liked the way he interceded and then comforted Spinelli. Their bond, their love was well illustrated. Diana is more of a cipher but it's unclear how she even feels about Sadie and it's more perhaps of a case that she came because of the baby's father and her mother's indignation. Diane is certainly reassuring, if anyone can get them custody she can! Looking forward to future installments.
| suerum chapter 4 . 11/21/2009
Very intimate little chapter. People seldom stop to just enjoy the moments that make up daily life. Yet, that is exactly what this short interlude is, a brief look into the domestic bliss of the Morgan-Spinelli household. Very nicely done, glad to see Sadie's growing up healthy and happy.
| Emeralden Rapley chapter 2 . 11/2/2009
i love this story so much. i hope the updates come quicker and faster. its so cute. i love jaspin stories. the GH i slash. until i remembered that Nik and Lucky are brother and should care that they are being slashed. but often or not i do care. and when i dont do some serious liz bashing wit that pairing. why? cause i hate her. i love emily but i hate her.
| suerum chapter 2 . 11/2/2009
what a lovely little continuation of this tale. Their shopping trip where Jason uters this immortal line: “I have a tendency to be amenable to anything you want, Spinelli.” Jason replies. The pickup of and trip with the baby complete with hearing from Carly. The newly formed family settling down for the night with Sadie Morgan Spinelli, all very sweet...
| freeamk chapter 1 . 10/7/2009
this chapter was really well written. spinelli's and jason's relationship was completely believable and jason and spinelli were totally in character. great job:D