Reviews for The Gloaming
barrr chapter 21 . 10/13
I am so late in reviewing this!
But, WOW!
This has got to be one of my favourite fics! It was just perfect. You wrote so well and kept all of the characters close to the original but different at the same time.
Gidget922 chapter 21 . 4/8
Wow I so loved reading this story I love you creativeness and turning the pov around xcellent
i 3 edward chapter 21 . 11/17/2014
Best fanfic ever I MEAN EVER ,! :-)
Comrade'sRoza chapter 21 . 11/17/2014
The ending was a bit abrupt but your story is really good!
debslmac chapter 21 . 10/28/2013
Loved this story
Toni Masen chapter 21 . 9/4/2013
Renee as Edwards' no no. I liked Mr and Mrs Newton, nice sensible people, unlike their son! Nice little story.
LulaGrace chapter 21 . 8/5/2013
This was a clever flip on the original - it followed the main plot points very closely but contained enough difference to keep it fresh! Thanks for sharing
LulaGrace chapter 15 . 8/5/2013
I would have been mad... Don't Edward and Charlie deserve more?
LulaGrace chapter 14 . 8/5/2013
I totally think of that commercial, too, when I hear that song!
LulaGrace chapter 13 . 8/5/2013
Poor Bella! I'm enjoying this flip
TwiSagaLover chapter 6 . 6/27/2013
ben better watch his back before Edward lets him have it!
TwiSagaLover chapter 5 . 6/27/2013
awe my poor poor man! he'll figure it out soon enough I just know it!
TwiSagaLover chapter 4 . 6/27/2013
awe he was going to try and impress her that's too cute! and good I'm glad mike looked like an ass hat cuz he is one! and Jake spilling the beans yey
TwiSagaLover chapter 3 . 6/27/2013
yeah mike needs a kick to the face! poor Edward again! and really no kid no matter how old wants to hear their parent talk like that! I feel his pain on that one!
TwiSagaLover chapter 2 . 6/27/2013
yeah mike sounds like a douc bag! and does bella have the mind reading gift like Edward did in twilight? that's cool
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